My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Weeds in the Garden
Since spring, blackbirds have been singing
At dawn and dusk, squabbling and serenading;
Exhausted now, the garden is quite still,
Except for occasional echoes of a silvery trill.
Underfoot the earth is soaked,
In my garden trees and shrubs are cloaked
With bindweed, rolling down like lava flow.
The grass is clad in dancing blooms of yellow,
Adorned with raindrops from a recent shower.
A wasp luxuriates on a yawning flower,
Drunk from the heady honeyed pollen
Of burgeoning blossoms into which it’s fallen.
A froth of wild garlic and unfurling fists of grass
Make it almost impossible to pass
Clouds of midges and soft orchestra of bees
Among the sprouting branches of fruit trees.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Image found on www.dreamstime.com
The image of a garden abandoned to summer over-growth is very pleasing, especially when winter has been hard and long.
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There is a lovely languorous feel throughout the whole piece, half day dream, half intoxication. It’s tightly written and conveys mood and imagery equally beautifully.
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Thank you for your kind comments.
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I love the imagery, and wish I had it all around me. I know most people like their gardens neat and somewhat controlled. I just love seeing Nature doing her thing as her own pace–she looks glorious, like your poem.
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Thank you, Magaly!
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I adore the way you have presented all the abundance of bloom… who said weed should be exterminated?
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I love my wild garden!
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It sounds like mine 🙂
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“grass is clad in dancing blooms of yellow,
Adorned with raindrops ”
Love this and all!
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Thanks Hannah!
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Oh this is a bit of heaven — loved the way you wove rhyme, images, movement & sound. Beautiful and inspiring.Thanks for sharing!
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Oh this is a bit of heaven. I love how you wove the rhyme, images, movement & sound throughout. Beautiful and inspiring. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you for reading!
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Really lovely. I especially liked “Exhausted now, the garden is quite still, / Except for occasional echoes of a silvery trill.”
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Thank you for reading and for your kind comments.
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I like the idea of a garden gone wild…gives me a sense of freedom. Beautiful writing.
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Thank you, Susie. I love the wildness of our garden and t he wildlife it attracts.
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Luv the lazy unfolding of Spring
Much love…
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Thank you, Gillena 🙂
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A garden naturally growing can be just as enticing especially with birds and small creatures around.
Hank
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