My response to dVerse Poets Pub Haibun Monday: A Little Romance: Toni has challenged us to pen a romantic haibun.
Although we’ve known each other since childhood, we’d been babies in prams in parallel roads, ran around the playground together when we were six years old and had shy crushes on each other as teenagers, I hadn’t seen you in about nineteen years, since that last chance meeting on the Tube. I’d often wondered what had happened to you. I moved around a lot, from country to country and town to town. You told me later that you believed I’d followed the hippy trail to somewhere like India, but I had always been a little closer to home, visiting my parents whenever I could. My mother suggested sending a letter to her local newspaper, as she still lived in the same part of town in which we both grew up, so I did: ‘Looking for a lost friend’ was the title they gave it. I never imagined you would get in touch immediately, or that you would visit me, a single parent living in a fairly remote part of the country you didn’t even know existed. So I waited at the window that October evening. You had got lost along the coast in the rolling sea mist. We talked all night, as if we had never been apart, and over the following months you visited most weekends and then took a short break so that we could spend time together, exploring the coast – and each other. It was then you proposed. At the end of January, we woke up married, after a night in a four-poster bed in a converted barn – we couldn’t afford a proper honeymoon. After breakfast, we got in the car to drive the few miles home in the early morning mist. Almost twenty four years later, we still love misty weather, especially that sea fog that rolls in off the North Norfolk coast.
scent of earth and sea
mingled breath of you and me
mist clings to coastline
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Beautifully told. Reading all the haibun on the topic has left me slightly misty-eyed – a condition I adore.
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Thank you so much!
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Such a beautiful love story Kim. I enjoyed every detail, down to the barn and sea fog rolls~ May the scent of love lingers on and on!
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Thank you, Grace!
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Awwee such a beautiful tale. And that haiku is just exquisite.. ❤
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Thankyou, Maria!
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Kim, this is such a beautiful love story. It’s so romantic especially your misty honeymoon -so sweet.Love the haiku.
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I’m so pleased you like it, Victoria.
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The haiku is truly exquisite. And knowing each other all your lives! So very romantic. My husband and I did the b&b thing over the weekend due to money and work constraints. We just decided every day would be part of the honeymoon. This is so wonderful….friendship and lovers. Perfect.
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Thank you, Toni. I’m delighted you like it. Since my daughter’s wedding in Tuscany he’s suggested renewing our vows but we haven’t decided when.
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I love that last line especially…that fog rolling in. Gorgeous.
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Thanks De 😊
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So wonderful…I got the chills and it wasn’t the cold coastal fog.
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Thank you for reading, Victoria!
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This brought on such a big smile, Kim. I was married in February, and our honeymoon was also on the seaside – a small cottage so close to the water that the sand blew under the door. It was bliss.
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I’m thrilled that the haibun made you smile. I think we are all romantics and there have been wonderful responses to the prompt, I’m so glad I found you all.
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Every bit the beauty, this one is! Well done, Kim!
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Thank you, Walter!
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SMiles.. online
tracks of lost loves..
lost friends.. but mostly
for me new ones that would
never ever live and thrive where
i grew up.. i can say with confidence
that at least from my Senior class.. none of
them would
know
me now..
as i escaped
the place they lived..
Online tracks
escape
Ignorance at home..:)
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I love life long love stories. Yours is all the more romantic because of the time lapse.Beautiful haiku.
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Thank you for reading and for your kind comments.
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This sounds like a very romantic movie….it could be!
A beautiful story of hope, fate and love.
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🙂
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