I would love to go to Snardiff
on the rhambangle train
but I’ve heard that in Snardiff
it’s likely to rain
cats and dogs,
if it’s not spitting
leaves or feathers;
it’s known to the locals
as snardiffanous weather.
If I don’t go, it’s no calamity
because it’s dry and warm at home
and full of lalamity:
it’s likely there’ll be
cocoa and warm furry slippers,
stories by the fire
and sometimes buttered kippers –
and I don’t have to wrangle
with umbrellas and zippers.
Kim M. Russell, 2016
Image found on Pinterest
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Stuff and Nonsense
Rommy is our host and wants to steer today’s prompt in a light-hearted direction. She says art doesn’t have to be serious to be meaningful. Sometimes a smile or even a full belly laugh can be more healing than sombre contemplation. So she has created three nonsense words to incorporate in our poems:
snarfdiffanous, rhambangle and lalamilty.
If none of these words tickle our muse she has invited us to make up a nonsense word of our own. The goal is to use them to create something that feels innocent or child-like. And if we can be a bit silly or funny, it’s a bonus. We must incorporate it in a new poem created for this prompt.
Snarfdiff sounds a bit like Cardiff. Is that what inspired your comments on the weather???
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I suppose it must have been , in a subconscious way, but it came directly from the word given by Rommy in the challenge, ‘snardiffanous’. I think Norfolk has more rain than Wales. Every time I’ve been to Cardiff, at least twice a year for the past three years, it’s been beautifully sunny!
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awesomesauce..The way you rendered different versions of snardfiffanous, was interesting and highly entertaining. Fun reading.
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Thank you!
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This is so fun and clever! I love it!
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Thank you, Mama Zen! I love a bit of fun to brighten up the day!
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I LOVE it! Besides being perfectly in the spirit of the prompt, I love how you’ve taken the words and really conjured up visuals that feel substantial despite the nonsense, to create something that really speaks of the comforts of home.
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Thank you, Rommy!
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Whistles!!❤️ My goodness Kim 😀 you totally blew me away with this charming write!❤️
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!
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Absolutely enchanting! So like a childs verse. I love it.
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Thank you, Candy!
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best line: full of lalamity This poem is so fun
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Thank you!
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Another marvelous children’s book this would make.
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I think I might get into trouble with the Welsh – Smardiff / Cardiff!
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Nah, the world of publishing is a free-for-all with such an array of limitless stories. You have made it your own.
(@–>–)
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Thanks Dorna!
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How fun! I think staying at home with cocoa sounds perfect!
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That’s what I plan to do today!
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First, I have to say that I’m in love with your chosen art. It’s sooo cute!
I love the poem. The rhyme, the teenage-eye-roll tone, and of course… the buttered kippers. Yes, I’m hungry!
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Thanks Magaly! I have to say, I find the humorous poems hardest to write but they are so much fun!
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Delightfully dodolicious ….
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Thank you, Helen!
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Ha better lalamity than calamity… love I think staying at home is perfect.
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🏡🍵🍫💩🎅
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You made me want to go there too. And I love the elephant photo!
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Thanks for reading, Sherry!
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Yes, this would make a great children’s book. It is certainly a good thing to stay in when snardiffanous weather is blowing outside.
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Thanks for reading, Susie!
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A very fun write. Luvved it 🎅🌲
Much love…
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Thank you, Gillena. Lots of love to you xxx
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