Footsteps echoed eerily in the fog,
Between the trees, behind the fence,
Past a woman walking her dog,
Clipping the heels of wing-tipped gents.
They stopped below a lone street lamp,
Waiting for someone in the sulphurous glow,
Impatient stamping in the cold and damp:
Prelude to a tentative hello.
Enveloped in overcoat and a swirl of mist,
A match glowed faintly as he lit a cigarette,
Gripping the heated lighter in his fist,
The only warmth against the chill and wet
Of a gloomy Wednesday afternoon.
Worried she might not be there soon
And fragile resolve would crack,
He knew there was no going back.
Footsteps echoed eerily in the fog,
Between the trees, behind the fence,
Past a woman walking her dog,
Clipping the heels of wing-tipped gents.
They stopped below a lone street lamp,
A warm embrace in the cold and damp
And someone smiled in the sulphurous glow
With a confident hello.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
Image: phylor aka Lorraine
My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Finish off Friday #6: Footsteps in the Fog 20.01.17
It’s Finish off Fridays (FoF) time again – the flash fiction writing prompt that alternates with Sanaa’s Friday Music Prompt. Lorraine provides the picture and the opening sentence, we write an additional 100 to 150 words to complete the story, not forgetting to include the picture and the opening sentence in our posts.
So atmospheric — reminded me of film noir — wonderful study of two people in the fog. The repetition strengthens the sense of film noir and of the flog as a cloak for clandestine meetings.
Thanks for participating.
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Such a great prompt, Lorraine, I had to write it!
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Glad it made you feel inspired.
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Well, you did a fantastic job with it! Glad the prompt provided a creative starting point.
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Such a phenomenal thriller! 🌹🌹🌹
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Thank yoy, Dorna!
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