I am building a treehouse of words
at the end of the garden where no one can find it
up high among branches and birds,
tethered by feathers and covered with foliage,
plastered with poems and rendered with rhyme;
as part of the tree it will grow over time.
I am building a treehouse of words
which doesn’t have storeys but tales of all kinds
about birds of the night, songbirds and snowbirds,
woodpeckers, pigeons, owls and finches;
flocks of poems wing from their quills
to ink up the bark and varnish the sills.
I am building a treehouse of words,
as high as I can in the whispering birches,
a collection of stories and verse
by my favourite writers and some of my own
to keep out of reach on the very top shelf:
an architectural anthology all for myself.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
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My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics – DIY Building also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Today Sara of Purple Pen in Portland is tending the bar. She tells us that she has always had a fascination with buildings, small, large, stone, or straw. She began thinking about designing her own building since the Flatiron Building is already taken. Which is why our challenge for today is to imagine that we have been given free reign to design any type of building we wish. What would our buildings look like?
This has a wonderful meter and rhymes… a wonderful place to be in that treehouse of verse. Yes that sounds wonderful
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Thank you, Björn! We could do an exchange!
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Build that treehouse of words – this is delightful Kim ~ Love the sounds specially of the second stanza and I can stay up there for a long time, smiles ~
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Ahh. a treehouse of words. I love it. My husband is building me a tree house at this point. Imagine, 65 years old and owning a tree house. I shall think of your lovely words when I climb to the top and have my first tea. I love this poem so very much.
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I like that tree house and the poem’s sound is delightful.
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Thanks Frank.
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All the poems tonight seem to feature words and nature, I suppose it’s ingrained in writers. I love the imagery of your tree house, I kept thinking about the giant tree house at Alnwick Castle.
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Thank you, Carol. When I was a child I spent a lot of time up in trees and they are my favourite plants, which is why our garden is full of them, as well as shrubs and, mostly, wild flowers.
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I’ve bought myself a box of wildflower seeds for the garden in the hopes of making it more butterfly and bee friendly.
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😊 🐝🌻
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a tree house of words this is so magical, i felt inspired to write about the trees too again today after seeing the prompt, as it’s a part of my childhood and holds such lovely memories, loved the way your words stepped in tune with each others, lovely to read out loud verses!
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Thank you!
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Yup, a novel & lovely notion. I had a treehouse (more a rustic fort built by my brother and I) as a kid. I love the notion that Toni is getting one. My “house” has a writer’s tower above the trees.
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Thanks Glenn!
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Wonderful, Kim. Magic, really.
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Thank you De!
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I’d like to sit a spell in your tree house of words, Kim
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You’re more than welcome to sit in my treehouse, Candy!
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This poem sounds like a children’s rhyme. I love that it doesn’t have storys, only tales. Thanks, Kim!
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Thank you, Sara! I got a bit tired last night so I have to finish reading everyone’s poems this morning, which I am so looking forward to..
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Ah, such beautiful lines in this verse. ❤
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Thank you, Maria!
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Wonderful rhymes and such a wonderful tree-house!
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Thank you kindly!
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i’d like to pay a visit of this house.
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😊
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I really like this. The form is quite playful, and the images are fantastic. It works really well.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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‘rendered with rhyme’ tremendous! I love your vision.
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Thank you, Jane!
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Kim, I think this is my favourite of all your poems. I think because the whole concept appeals to me greatly, and I love your use of repetition and rhyme.. it conveys a sense of nostalgia.
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Thank you so much, Kerry!
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Oh this is absolutely stunning, Kim!❤️ This one has a wonderful meter and rhyme and the idea of a tree-house of words is truly magical 😀
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I’d like to visit you there!
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Word treehouse doors and windows are always open, Marian!
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flocks of poems wing from their quills
to ink up the bark and varnish the sills. That’s a wonderful way for poetry to come forth. Don’t set it too high, you’ve got to share with others
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Thank you, Walter!
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The cadence is divine. Love the repetition of “I am building a treehouse of words”. This has to be one of my favourites of yours, Kim.
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Thank you, Mish!
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Fantabulous! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you, Dorna!
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LOVE the illustration, the refrain, and the fanciful construction you’ve given us here. May I come visit? I shall bring a housewarming gift of rhyme, and sweet apple pie and perhaps you can provide the meter and wine? ❤🍷
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Thank you, Lillian, and you’re welcome any time!
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to keep out of reach on the very top shelf:
an architectural anthology all for myself.
There will certainly be a set of people one keeps close in touch. Those are the ones on the very top shelf! Quite true Kim!
Hank
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Hank!
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Brilliant conceptual poetry…storeys and stories…words to build with and share…I love it.
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Thank you, Paul! I’m hosting the dVerse Quadrille this evening but I have choir practice between 7.30 and 9.00 pm so I will be late to the bar. Bjorn and the others will hold the fort until I get back!
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Cool. I’ll be there. Have fun at the choir.
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We’re still doing the heavy rock version of ‘Happy’ 🙂
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