I was recently reminded I’m getting old,
a greying guest of nature, mother and wife.
In an attempt to solve the riddle of my soul,
I gnaw and chew life out of life.
Stiff fingers falter, they fumble,
writing is a spidery scrawl on a page;
as I peck at the keyboard, words tumble,
I wrestle with them before they’re erased.
Every poem’s a prayer to memories,
each story I write is a magic spell,
and novels knot friends and family
in the fabric of fiction I know so well.
Kim M. Russell, 11th April 2017
On Day 11 of The Poetry School’s NaPoWriMo prompts, it’s Old English Day. I’ve linked my poem to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform.
Old English or Anglo-Saxon verse is fascinating and powerful. To write in a typical Anglo-Saxon way, you need:
- lines with 4 stresses (though it doesn’t matter how many feet, i.e. your line can be as short as ‘Hold. Stay! Hold, hold!’ or as long as you want providing it only has 4 stresses)
- an optional central caesuraor pause between stress 2 and 3
- alliteration of 3 of the 4 stress words (this doesn’t have to be on the first syllable if the stress is on a later syllable, e.g. although would alliterate on ‘th’).
It’s all very flexible though. If you want to alliterate 2 of the words, or all 4, or you want to skip your caesura, that’s absolutely fine.
To make it easier, they have provided as an example a few lines from Simon Armitage’s translation of ‘Gawain’ (which is actually a Middle English revival of the alliterative style). The stresses are indicated in bold:
as he heaped his hair to the crown of his head,
the nape of his neck now naked and ready.
Gawain grips the axe and heaves it heavenwards,
I love that about writing. It is better with age and experience .
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Thanks for reading, Joseph!
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Most welcome!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, Emilie!
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I love what you wrote but have no idea how you got there even having read the ‘How’ Looks like a form that needs study to me. Continue with the magic spells though…those I understand all too well.
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I have no idea either, Paul! I was going to write an Old English style poem about King Arthur and all that other stuff came out instead! But still written in the correct form.
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Enjoyed this especially all the alliteration at the end.
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Thank you!
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In an attempt to solve the riddle of my soul,
I gnaw and chew life out of life…. like that!! The form seems quite challenging too.
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Yes, it’s a tricky one. I was worried that I had by-passed the Old English aspect but apparently that doesn’t matter. I just went with the flow 🙂
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I am very impressed! The Anglo-Saxon alliterations usually sound forced and heavy to my ears, but yours are not at all intrusive. Nice to know this form can be so contemporary!
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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“Every poem’s a prayer to memories”. How I love that line… I tend to fall for poetry that tells the truth.
Impressive job with the form.
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Thank you, Magaly!
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Magnificent!
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Thanks Dorna!
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Every poem’s a prayer to memories…
The problem arises when one has forgotten what one has written..
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How true!
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Every poem’s a prayer to memories,
each story I write is a magic spell,
and novels knot friends and family
in the fabric of fiction I know so well.
Your words always touch my heart deeply, Kim ❤️ Beautifully penned.
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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“Every poem’s a prayer to memories” — great line.
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Thank you, Justin!
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I have to tell you when I read through your poem the first time I ‘saw’ GUST, not GUEST! You are a delightful gust of what is good in nature 🙂
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Thank you, Helen!
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Wonderful lines…loved the poem!
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Thank you, Sreeja!
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Every poem’s a prayer to memories,
each story I write is a magic spell,
One feels elated knowing it has turned out right
Hank
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People reading and commenting on our efforts is a reward in itself. Thank you.
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Goodness, when I look back on my first poetry writings on my blog I definitely find “writing gets better with age.”
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😊
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