The country road tilts and blends
into a sudden blind bend,
overhung with bush and tree,
so dense that, at first, I do not see
a red and white sign erupting
from a pile of soil: heavy plant crossing.
My imagination runs riot
with giant hogweed and triffids
evolved from seeds that drifted
down from distant planets,
and with forests of Tolkien’s magical Ents.
Sadly behind the roadside wire fence,
dinosaur diggers make a racket,
driven by men in bright yellow jackets.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
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My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: And the sign says….
Also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Today it is Mish from mishunderstood.wordpress.com bringing us today’s Poetics. She tells us that on one of her recent drives home from work, winding along a beautiful river road, she was thinking about the various signs that greet her along the way. With limited words or simple symbols, they advise, guide or warn of the next curve in the road. They are short and sweet, much like titles to a story, or perhaps…..a poem?
Today Mish would like us to choose a sign as a visual prompt. Let it speak metaphorically or as an allegory; take us to a deeper place or even a comical place. Our signs do not need to have words, as symbols have stories and voices too. The choice is ours.
Oh so much better if those heavy plants where indeed crossing… such disappointment to see the men in yellow jackets. Would have been great to find some ents.
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They are building a by-pass on our regular route into Norwich so whenever we drive into the city we see lots of these!
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Imagination over reality ~ I wouldn’t mind seeing these:
with giant hogweed and triffids
evolved from seeds that drifted
down from distant planets,
and with forests of Tolkien’s magical Ents.
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LOVE the sign!
I vote for humongous ivy hovering overhead, grasping the telephone pole and crawling on the wires, listening to phone calls and sending messages through weeping willows that ooze onto roads — wait! Men in bright yellow jackets??? How dare they appear as busters of my imaginative sign reading here! 😊❤❤ Loving this one, Kim!
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Nice sign for Tolkien’s trees that walked around. Or those “dinosaur diggers”.
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That sign here in the colonies would confuse people–like “the door is ajar”. But your poem gave me giggles before I began to day dream about hordes of men in yellow jackets digging up my back yard.
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I’d rather have triffids and trees in the garden, Glenn!
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Sorry there were no triffids or ents – but did you at least wait to see the dinosaurs dug up? 😀
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That I would love to see! They’ve dug up a mammoth not far from here.
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I agree, this is so visually intriguing.. what with “giant hogweed and triffids evolved from seeds that drifted down from distant planets” and oh “dinosaur diggers make a racket, driven by men in bright yellow jackets.” Beautifully penned.
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Thanks Sanaa!
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Giant hogweeds can be pretty scary!
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Love the twist of this! It’s all about perspective, isn’t it?
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Perspective is the key, Jilly, when it comes to ambiguity 😊
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This is so lyrical and yet whimsically wistful and dark, too – in an age of modernity – and better means of ease in transport – but I so enjoyed the way you’ve played with all of this – creating a bit of a fantastical Eden to keep us delighted – and hey yellow jackets – where are the “killer bees” to come and swarm such “progression” – although perhaps, that’s not exactly a great metaphor – I was reading in the news of late how parts of London were in fact swarmed? Anyhow, great writing here Kim 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Great imaginative journey! I’m still pondering what in the world heavy plant crossing really means, however!
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Plant is another word for machinery, Bev, things like tractors, dumper trucks, large earth moving machines. I suppose it’s a handy shorthand term but is funny.
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I was starting to get drowsy but this poem woke me up! Pure imagination..based on a funny sign…I love it 🙂
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Thank you, Janice! That sign tickles me every time I see it!
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I can well imagine 🙂 definitely poem worthy material.
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🙂
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Your imagination took usl on an enchanting path…..oh if only it was true and those yellow jackets were giant fuzzy bumblebees! I especially love the alliteration in the first two lines.
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🐝
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Ha! Now that was fun
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😊
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The colors of reality sometimes force us to move away from the realm of imagination. Love the natural scenes you’ve painted.
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Thank you, Sumana!
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I could only smile with great pleasure.
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So happy to have made you smile, Liz! 😊
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I loved the way you imagined this. That is an odd sign. I would imagine a huge, monster plant crossing the road, too, but you said it so delightfully.
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You can find this sign all over the UK and I’ve always found it amusing. 😊
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Perfect timing in the placing of contrasts here, Kim.
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Thanks Kerry!
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you drove this message home with such brilliant humour and observation – classic closing lines 🙂
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Thank you, Laura!
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Brings to mind giant Ents, indeed!
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Sad, indeed. My imagination immediately took me to St.Exupery’s “The Little Prince” where those huge plants invade his little planet and threaten his rose.
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A very Groovy-Trippy trip. 😎😎🌹
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🙂
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