First flush of morning percolates
through crepuscular dreams,
lays first thoughts behind
sleep-encrusted lids. Words
hatch and squirm, caterpillars
to feed the hungry birds
of creativity. No point
in wrestling with the behe-
moths that eat holes
in the rags of night,
let in first light.
It’s time to write.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
‘Dance of the Moth’ by Paul Klee found on Pinterest
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Scribble It – First Time
Today is Paul’s ‘maiden voyage’ with the Toads and he has been pondering about our experiences of ‘First Times’: first steps, first teeth, first words, first flight, first kiss, first fall, first love, first… He’d like a poem that speaks in some way of a ‘First Time,’ one already met or perhaps to come.
I love this Kim. The multiple use of firsts works so well. This really describes our waking and grasping for words so beautifully.Time to write it was and write so wonderfully you did.
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Thank you, Paul. See you later at the dVerse Open Link Night!
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Will do.
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This is absolutely gorgeously penned, Kim!❤️ Especially love; “Words hatch and squirm, caterpillars to feed the hungry birds of creativity.” *swoooooooon*❤️
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!
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Writing is a light and gift
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🙂
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How well you describe your writing pains or pangs as the case may be. When you have the urge you really must do it. lest it flee and refuse to play again.
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🙂
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A great write. I woke with the poet’s voice, and staggered to the writing desk with her… although I detoured to the coffee pot along the way. Priorities!
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At the time of writing I was drinking a mug of London Tea Company Raspberry Inferno, my favourite fruity tea – it has a kick to it. Coffee doesn’t like me, although I can just about stomach decaff mocha.
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Ah! Well, what’s the quote…? One woman’s poison… another man’s coffee… something like that! 🙂
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Great write Kim
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Thank you kindly!
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Wonderful imagery in this poem, Kim………I especially love the wrestling of the behemoth that eats holes in the rags of night. Wow!
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, Sherry!
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This is gorgeous from first word to last!
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Thank you so much, Mama Zen!
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Any poem which includes the word ‘crepuscular’ is a winner in my eyes. Beautiful ode to morning light.
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Thank you, Kerry!
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Incredible images of creativity in this poem. I love the first to the last line. And crepuscular….love it!!! You always use such interesting words in your poems.
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Thank you, Toni! I think that because early morning is a special time for me, a time of silence, stillness and creativity, and I wrote the poem at that time, I became immersed and let the ideas and words wash over me. Sometimes they stick and I use them, other times an idea of a word slips into my head and I have to help it on with a thesaurus. This time I had a couple of adjectives that I was playing with and ‘crepuscular’ just reached out and grabbed me! Please excuse the Steve Miller reference! I woke up singing Abracadabra! Let’s hope today is going to be a magical day. 🙂
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I love the Steve Miller reference! It is going to be magical just because of this poem.
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Good morning! You mentioned your morning practice, and now I understand it? I love those writhing words, desperate to take flight.
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Good morning, Sarah! You’re also up early in front of your computer! Isn’t it fun and exciting to think that there are so many poets all around the world doing similar things, albeit at different times. But we’re in the same time zone – spooky!
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I wouldn’t normally be here! It’s school holidays, so I’m stealing a moment…
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But I know what you mean 😌. And sometimes I read a poem from the other side of the world that resonates so perfectly with what I’m doing or thinking, or seeing, right here, it makes me gasp.
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Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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lluv where the prompt took you and I luv Paul Klee’s works; a double delight thank you
much love…
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WOW, stunning writing!!
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Thanks Jael!
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Most welcome always 🙂
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“No point
in wrestling with the behe-
moths that eat holes
in the rags of night”
I love that.
Great piece!
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Thank you, Susie!
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