Along banks and edges of paths and fields,
trees watch; their branches lances
sharp enough to pierce, their leaves shields.
What we think are hollow trunks, devoid
of sap and bark, that rise from ponds
still as looking glass, are ragged shadows
of wet birch and ash, wizard wands
that trick us into thinking reeds are grass
and stinking bogs are summer meadows.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
Photograph taken by David Russell (I left my camera at home when we went for a walk today)
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Out of Standard – Writing Unseen
Isadora has set us a challenge to defy the conventions of a particular theme and find new places in the everyday. She says that today’s prompt is fairly simple. We should write a poem about something we can’t see fully, whether it’s the sea monster draped in darkness or just the silhouette of a lover blotted out by the sun, we are all intrigued with the details that exist but escape our sights. All poems must be something shiny and new.
Wizard wands indeed. I wonder, are those the relics of a fire? A ghostly presence, for sure.
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We couldn’t get close enough to find out what had happened to them, but there were more on the other side of the path.
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They certainly look like wizard wands! Trees to have a certain magic I believe. Love this Kim!
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Thank you, Carrie!
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If those trees are in a swamp or drowned land, I imagine the roots rotted. Along the east coast here in the states, we have tons of acreage with these drowned trees – usually cypress, cedar, and oak. I love your take on these trees – the wizard wands. I am re-reading the Harry Potter series (for the umpteenth time) and I think a wand made from one of the trees would bring about some ghostly results.
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I’d never seen them around here before. They were quite eerie and I found myself mesmerised by them. I have a curly willow wand I made from a branch that fell from our tree. I painted, varnished and decorated it with ribbons for a Harry Potter evening I ran at the library. Enjoy your re-read, Toni!
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wizard wands that trick us
into thinking reeds are grass
Dead trees standing can be such a show of nature’s beauty a delight to see
Hank
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Thank you, Hank!
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Kim, I really like how you’ve chosen to portray the mucky bog in its splendor and mystery, or rather it’s subterfuge. Clever, clever, clever!!!!!
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Thank you, Isadora! We’re off to Cley on the North Norfolk coast today, where there is a windmill and a beautiful stretch of beach with water fowl, shells and pebbles. I won’t forget my camera this time 😉
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Depends on how old our eyes are as I know that as a young boy running wild I could conjur up in my mind any scene in scrubby woodlands or dirty streams to please my adventurous mind…but I was lucky and WW2 was on and us kids were unstoppable.
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Nothing like childhood adventures!
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“are ragged shadows
of wet birch and ash, wizard wands” Oh, I love that. We just had to cut down an ash because borers killed it. It felt like a funeral.
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They were a surprise on our walk yesterday – we hadn’t noticed them before.
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The photo – and the place – are beautiful and I love the poem…….especially your closing lines.
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You make the atmosphere of this very real, and I do believe no tree is ever without its magic, dead or alive.
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Thank you!
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Excellent! 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thanks Dorna!
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Nice. Magical for sure. Once as a child I grabbed a stick like that, a wizard wand, that turned out to be a snake. Scarred for life! I guess that was magical, too. 🙂
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Thank you, Marian!
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I think it’s wonderful, just marvelous that you can write about the unseen in a ways that allow us to see exactly what’s there, where our eyes can’t see. Love the image you’ve painted.
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Thank you, Magaly!
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Trickery ~~~ is good!!
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🙂
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Lovely post!
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Thank you, Ayala!
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wizard wands… this poem reads as if through the eyes of a child…
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The inner child is always there, Margret!
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