We ride distorted monsters
beyond sandcastle borders,
past pebbles and fizzing foam
to whispering eel grass meadows.
Tethered to stalks, their snaking
chameleon tails swish,
graceful gliding curlicues,
neither horse nor fish.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Tuesday Poetics: Border, also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Grace is our host this Tuesday and is thinking about the news and borders: people coming in or coming out from one country to another, some travelling for leisure or for adventure and some at great sacrifice and consequences for a better life. She says the border may not only be a physical boundary of one town versus the other town, it may also be an invisible one, such as an imaginary, social or mental border.
Grace has shared three poems with the theme of border and challenges us to write some more, including the word in our titles or our poems. An extra challenge is to write about the invisible border theme e.g. mental borders or imaginary boundaries. The form and structure are our choice.
Love the sound of your poem… it rolls of the tongue in a very delicious way…
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I specially love your description: their snaking
chameleon tails swish,
graceful gliding curlicues,
Hope you feel better Kim ~ Thanks for joining in ~
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Thank you Grace.
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LOVE it! Have always been fascinated by these creatures 🙂
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Thank you, Lillian!
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This makes me feel all kinds of clap-happy, Miss Kimmy. Sooo good. 🙂
Ooh, Lil Kim. “Lady Marmalade.” Thanks for the reminder. Gotta go give that girl (and her sexy gal pals) a listen.
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Thanks Shawna!
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What a lovely picture and poem. XXXX
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🙂 xxx
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I too have always been fascinated by sea horses…I love your take on the prompt the chameleon tails of the little critters….get some rest!
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Thanks Toni.
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The seahorse goes beyond the borders of both horse and fish. I like “sandcastle borders” which may be defended for a day.
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I was surprised to find out how small most sea horses are, like hummingbirds of the sea; they are so primordial; 10th cousin to the gators
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A lovely little adventure! I always think their movements have kind of a regal air.
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna. Seahorses are serene creatures.
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Wonderful creatures and a wonderful poem! Love this Kim!
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Thanks Carrie!
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Wonderful sound, this poem is like a painting.
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Thank you!
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Yes, I love the sound. I read it out loud and I really like how it flows.
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Thank you, Susie!
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I really enjoyed how magical this sounds, almost like a dream, so colourful. I bet my little girl would love it too 🙂
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Thank you kindly!
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Ah sweet.k.
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Thanks!
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fun poem for the image
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I love to visit the Charleston Aquarium – they have lovely sea horses and, being a horseback rider, I imagine myself riding these graceful creatures … “whispering eel grass meadows”… the place of mermaid dreams I think 🙂
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🙂
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Nice description of the seahorse, you’ve given them appealing qualities. Great reading. I’ve never seen one, have you? Fakes? No, Google and I both think they are fish.
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I’ve only ever seen on at an aquarium and I agree – it was a fish!
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Lovely. This totally got to me! 🙂
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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Oh wow. A very unique take Kim!
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Whimsical and beautiful like the seahorse.
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You bring these magnificent creatures to life with your words! Sigh.. beautiful!❤️
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They are tiny fairy creatures and you give them a new dimension with your words.
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whispering eel grass meadows… wow.. magical.
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🙂
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This is so stylishly done, Kim.
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Thank you very much, Kerry!
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I’ve noticed your flow in your writing is always smooth and as others have said here, rolls right off the tongue. Keep up that great rhythm- your details and imagery are what make your writing so unique and lovely! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Angie!
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love the whimsy and free feeling in this, Kim
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Thank you, Candy!
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Your images are full of life and motion…..very cool.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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Your poem brings the painting to life…
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Thank you, Magaly! I was delighted when I discovered the painting – I never linked Mexico with seahorses before!
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Great images to enhance the wonderful painting.
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Thanks Sarah! I wrote the poem and then searched for an appropriate illustration- I fell in love with this one and it also linked well to the ‘border’ theme.
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I love seahorses, and your poem! Gorgeous write!
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome!
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Such an Expressive scenery with Intense Emotions. 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Thanks!
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Hi Kim.
Thanks for following my blog, which is much appreciated.
It seems you are not that far from Beetley!
Best wishes, Pete.
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