My note book is a testament
to bitten nails, ragged and rent,
and heretic bleed of cuticles
not neatly trimmed and beautiful
but ripped, picked and gnawed
while searching for the perfect word,
the one that shines with serendipity,
arriving as an epiphany
and written down to be used
in stories, poems and reviews.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Words Count with Mama Zen and linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night.
Mama Zen tells us that, for a creative writing class, her offspring had to create a book of favourite words. She says she stole a few of them to include in a list for this poetry prompt.
Our Assignment is to choose three words from the list and compose a little bit of brilliance of no more than sixty words. Bonus points for a poem with the title ‘Book of Words’. I chose: testament, heretic and serendipity.
Oh I do love this concept of a favorite list of words… I used to have it, but then I realized it always led me to poetry of cliches … one of my twitter friends loved the word verdigris.
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I also have phrases I have heard or read, and bits of articles about things that interest me that I sometimes use for found poetry.
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Ah yes I can relate to the feeling.. that incessant need of finding just the right words!💖 Beautifully executed.
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Have done that many a time. Especially when I have found some interesting word while reading or discussing something with friends. 🙂 A note to use in the future sometime.
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Thanks for commenting, Vinay 🙂
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I love lists of words as well. A bit bizarre: pumpernickel, ledgerdemain (sp?) Mt. Fuji, and of course on the list is verdigris and puce. I never felt it led me to clichés….just down the rabbit hole!
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Oh, pumpernickel – great word, great taste! What about flibbertigibbet, mellifluous, or even vellichor? 🙂
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Such a creative mind you have. The list of words are amazing and everything you wrote is within your heart and soul that speak goodness. 🙂
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Thank you, Charlie! 🙂
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And here I thought I was the only one who carried a raggedy-taggedy notebook of random words and phrases I think I just might use one day! I loved this poem!
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Thank you, Bev!
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“heretic bleed of cuticles” – great.
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Thanks!
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If only it would come at the click of the keys or a pen, smiles ~ I specially like: one that shines with serendipity (if only,ha) ~
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One of my favourite words!
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Oh I love this one Kim! I can picture those nails so clearly lol
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Thanks Diana!
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love your words and your notebooks. I’m always making lists of words I find interesting.
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🙂
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I love hat you did with the words, and I love the beautiful poetry books and journals in the photo….a treasure trove of material, I am sure.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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My nails are unchewed but certainly the dictionary gets a hammering when searching for the words that illustrate one’s feelings. Your poem progresses well from angst to satisfaction to relax the reader at the end.
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That’s the magic of words! 🙂
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Marvelous strong metaphors that invigorate, so alive!
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Thank you, Nan!
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The best notebooks are well worn and loved
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🙂
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I just read Mama Zen and then whilst reading you thought, ‘that’s funny, they both used the word heretic’
I need to go drink coffee and start again!!!
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I’m just about to make myself a mocha before the sweep arrives to clean both chimneys and multi-fuel burners. I’m already preparing for winter 🙂
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Well, you did. And this is brilliant. Into the head of a writer. enjoyed this. And it is a universal condition, the nails, I think.
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Thank you, Jane. I’m trying hard to leave my nails alone. The lovely girl who gives my hands a paraffin treatment, which eases arthritis, does my nails too, to encourage me. It seems to work. 🙂
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Agonizing over choice of words sounds familiar. I love collecting favorite words, but the list keeps growing and growing… Still, you encapsulate a labor of love so well Kim.
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Thank you!
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Words are the gems in the crowning of our poetry, Kim! What a wonderful exercise – a Book of Words. I’ll be making an effort to compile one!
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Go for it, Walter!
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A list of favorite words. Love that concept and the unending search for the perfect choice for our poems. Glad my thesaurus is online, or it would be in tatters.
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I like the poem and your journals in the photo.
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I started a collection of dictionaries, a long time ago. Now the internet has cured me of that Madness. Now I just google
Luv your poem for its painstaking efforts with words.
Much love…
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Ah, the gritty reality of word-smithing!
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🙂
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It is so exciting to explore a new word. You have inspired me to keep a list.
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🙂
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Nice! This reminded me of my old math books — sprinkled with dandruff from much head scratching. 😛
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🙂
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A very sweet poem that is easy to relate to, thanks! k.
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Thank you!
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Oh, this is perfect!
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Thank you so much!
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Such an accurate description of a poet’s notebook. I have recently realized that the poet’s job is not so much to FIND the right word as to wrestle and even fight with language until the poet and poem have both affected each other to change both the writer and the written your poem seems to be testament to that.
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Thank you, Bryan.
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Wow
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Another Spectacular scene. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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Thank you so much, Dorna!
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A very unfermented poem that is prosperous to link to, thanks! such(a) an accurate verbal description of a poet’s notebook.
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A very perfumed poem that is promiscuous to link up to, thanks! such(a) an exact verbal description of a poet’s notebook computer.
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Collecting and using words is something all of us writers (at least the good ones) do on a daily basis. I have a notebook too, only mine is digital.
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