I have never had pleasure
in any kind of treasure
and no sparkling diamond
can be my best friend.
But the peridot colours
of an August garden
delight me with greens and ochres,
golden sunshine dancing in the sky,
protection from the evil eye.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Tuesday Poetics – This one’s for you!
Lill says they have just celebrated two birthdays in her family, which got her thinking about birthdays. She guesses that big birthdays vary by country and culture. For example, in her family, 10 was always very special because you reached the double digits and for her 10th birthday, her father gave her a birthstone ring. She says she’s sure the emerald wasn’t real, but she felt grown up when he put that ring on her finger.
For today’s prompt, Lill asks that we write a poem that includes our birthstone.
Actually, when I read the historiy of birthstones, it was believed that they had special protective powers! So there you go — may the peridot force be with you 😊
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Delightful… love the rhymes which refers back to songs about diamonds… the rhymes just roll me into that wonderful garden of yellow and green.
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Garden or diamond – has to be a garden every time!
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Love how you associate the color of your birthstone with what’s happening in the natural world at that time, many of our words are full of personal connotations and links- this is like seeing through your eyes.
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It’s colours sound beautiful. The poem has a lovely lilt to it.
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Thank you, Alison!
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It is a nice green color.
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A beautiful peridot poem Kim and it is a stone I have always liked – the greens of nature and ‘golden sunshine dancing in the sky’ are so lovely! :o) xxx
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Thank you, Xenia! 🙂 xxx
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:o) xxx
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Today we all get a lesson on birthstones; excellent. I like the notion that you prefer the natural gifts of garden over the manufactured gifts of gems.
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Sounds like it’s the prefect stone for you then Kim, reflecting your love of the green.
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Your descriptions bring your stone to life. Good take on the prompt.
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Thanks Viv!
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How lovely, a reminder of the “green, green grass of home” basking in sunshine. Your poems are always so image-rich!
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Thank you, Bev!
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Peridot’s my stone too. Don’t know if anything could protect you from the Texas Summer sun, yikes!
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cadence and contrast, a rhyme scheme that organically ties it all together: I love the compression of meaning you accomplish with this economy of lyrical beauty!
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Thank you so much, Frank!
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I believe a few of the birthstones were meant to be protectors of evil. Not really a fan of that thinking, but turquoise is too, and whatever does, let it do. Love your poem!
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Thank you, Mary!
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beautiful and lovely. almost sound as rhyme.
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Thank you!
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love: peridot colors of the august garden.
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It seems logical such a stone represents August…there seems to be a lot of truth to Astrology, contrary to what I used to think.:-) Precious.
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Ah! all the treasures of the universe can never match the nature:)
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“Peridot colours” is a wonderful way to describe August greens and yellows. I’m amazed I had not heard of this stone before. I like how you open the poem reflecting on the insignificance of precious jewels and then weave in the reference to peridot which I imagine may be one of the most earthy birthstones.
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Apparently they are found in volcanic lava and meteorites.
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Wow! I find that exciting, particularly the ones from space …
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loved greenery, garden and sunshine…things I love most!!
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Thanks Sreeja!
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