Once upon a van Gogh night
more colourful than day,
a shoal of stars, disturbed, took flight,
and poured down from the sky.
I couldn’t find a little boat
to row on the cosmic sea,
nor did I have a fishing-net
to catch some dreams for me.
I tossed and turned on my pillow,
and twisted my sheets in the dark
into a rope, a cotton lasso
to hunt for a comet shark.
Comet sharks are notorious
for playing hide and seek;
I had a nightmare finding one –
it took me over a week.
A sparkly shark swam down from the North,
its teeth were sharp and white
and, unlike those down here on earth,
it didn’t take a bite.
It pushed me gently with its nose
back to the warmth of my sheets,
pulled the covers up to my nose
and sang me back to sleep.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Tuesday Poetics – Sleep
Today our host is Frank, who is focusing on the topic of sleep. He says sleep can suggest many things: rest, dreams, nighmares, or even death. Some people view sleep as a waste of time. Some view it as a source of inspiration. Even when we are awake, some claim that we are ‘asleep’ and need to ‘wake up’. Others think there’s nothing but sleep and dreaming.
Another motivation for this prompt came from a walk through Lincoln Park in Chicago, when Frank found a statue dedicated to Eugene Field and his children’s poem, ‘Wynken, Blynken and Nod’.
For this prompt, Frank wants us to write about sleep. I kind of went with the Eugene Field vibe and wrote a poem for children.
I just took a quick break to check my e-mail when this popped into my box. Lovely, like a lullaby, Kim–with van Gogh, too. Starry night and and comet sharks! 🙂
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Thank you, Merril!
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This was great fun for the kid in us all. Comet sharks remind me off 1975 in LA, a one night special performance at the Hollywood Bowl of MOBY DICK; The whale was a comet & it starred Christopher Lee, written by Ray Bradbury.
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Thanks Glenn! I think I might write more children’s poems for that little grandchild of mine that will be arriving in March. 🙂
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That was a very protective comet shark at the end tucking one back into bed. I liked “nightmare” in this line: “I had a nightmare finding one”. Very nice sound!
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I have a fear of sharks even though I know I will never come face to face with one. But I quite like the comet shark!
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What a great idea to make this a lullaby, really fitted and the idea of a cosmic shark is adoring. This should be put in a book I think
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Thanks Bjorn! I recently submitted three dinosaur-themed poems for a children’s anthology. I’ll keep my eyes peeled for an anthology that might have a page for this one. 🙂
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Delicious imagery and the rhyme flows so wonderfully. Comet sharks sound fun.
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Thanks Paul. I prefer comet sharks to real ones – they scare the bejaysus out of me!
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Star fishing through a Van Gogh night. So beautifully lyrical!
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Thank you, Bev!
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Sounds like a perfect dream 🙂
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Thanks Jane. I hope you’re not having too much of a nightmare with the move.
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The worst is over, thanks. We can cope with the mess in our own time now.
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Fabulous! 😎😎😎😎😎
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this was a lovely story, and reminds me of how we have such tumbled and mixed up dreams.
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Thanks Alison!
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Beautiful story Kim. The first line caught my attention, I loved it already, just with that 1st line.
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Thank you, Hélène!
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Kim, This is one of the best things I’ve read in ages – really appeals!
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Thank you so much, Jill!
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I LOVE the third and final stanzas.
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What a lovely bedtime tale this would make, Kim.
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This should definitely be read aloud to a child.
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Just lovely imagery – laughed at the shark pushing you gently with its nose – and then singing you to sleep. Kids and grown ups too would love this.
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Thank you, Peter!
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This is great. What a voyage! Lovely pictures in my head, now.
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Glad you like it, Sarah!
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A cosmic lullaby with a friendly comet shark…I think Van Gogh could have used such soothing 🙂
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I think he just needed a bit of loving care and understanding. Thanks for reading and commenting Lynn. 🙂
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His troubled mind produced great beauty!
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Lovely
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Thank you!
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The rhythm of the poem reminds me of the children’s books I read to my toddler. Will make for a nice toddler book with illustrations
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Thank you very much, Namy! I wonder if there’s an illustrator who’d be interested in a collaboration.
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kaykuala
pulled the covers up to my nose
and sang me back to sleep.
What a friendly ‘shark’! Nice to have friends being so considerate!
Hank
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This is a fun and creative poem, and the rhyme and rhythm make it seen almost like a lullaby.
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What perfection here. I want to live in this poem!
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Me too!
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This was lighthearted and sweet😊
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I really enjoyed reading this magical poem Kim. Thanks for sharing! 🙂
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Thanks for reading and commenting! 🙂
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