melting into the sea
the full moon
leaves a candle bright Jane Reichhold
autumn needs a path of light
to guide her into winter Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to Carpe Diem #1273 Into The Sea
Today we have a Tan Renga Challenge that was originally published on December 20th 2013: a haiku by Jane Reichhold.
‘Into the sea’ is the title of the haiku by Jane Reichhold that Chèvrefeuille would like us to work with to create a Tan Renga, a short chained poem (a tanka) written by two poets. We have to write the second stanza from the scenes in the haiku.
Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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A beautiful response Kim :o) xxx
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Thank you, Xenia! I hope your week has started well. It’s bright here today. 😊😎🌞 xxx
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Thank you Kim, it has been lovely here so far and the temperature is still rising! Enjoy the rest of your week! :o) xxx
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Excellent
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Thank you, Kristjaan!
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Great continuation
Winter is coming.
namaste
JzB
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Thanks!
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A perfect finish. I like the idea of a guide.
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Thank you, Sara.
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