Snout-fair and sweetly pargetted,
you are a percher, peacockizing
in your silken man-millinery,
holding a slim cigarette
between long fingers
adorned with flashing jewellery.
You may toss your scented hair
and flash your painted smile,
they may buy you popularity,
but only for a while –
until your skin wrinkles
and your dazzling teeth fall out –
one day the fickle fair
will retire from your snout.
Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Scribble It: Awhape me!
It’s Thursday and Paul, also known as The Scibbler, is back for a second edition of ‘Scribble It.’ He tells us that experts at the University of York have compiled a list of 30 words from the English language that have fallen out of our consciousness and conversation and might conceivably make a comeback. He wants us to put that idea to the test by sharing with us that the list of words and their meanings. Paul would like us to pick one or more of those words and include them in a poem. I have chosen:
Man-millinery: Suggestive of male vanity or pomposity
Parget: To daub or plaster the face or body with powder or paint
Snout-fair: Having a fair countenance; fair-faced, comely, handsome
Peacockize: To behave like a peacock; esp. to pose or strut ostentatiously
Percher: A person who aspires to a higher rank or status; an ambitious or self-assertive person
Fabulous choice of words and so well put together. Brings to mind Dorian Grey.
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Yes, he was in the back of my mind, together with Mick Jagger!
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Haha! This is so well done! I had to laugh at man-millinery and peacockizing! They are so apt.
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Thank you, Kerry!
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Ah… one day it happens to all of us, I suppose.
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True!
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Fantastic! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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Whoa! This is really good, Kim. Parget I didn’t know, and percher must be strictly an “English” word. But it fits! What a hoot!! Snout fair….LOL~ I almost wet my pants on that one.
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Thanks Jane! I enjoyed this challenge – I love words!
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Saw that Paul thought the same… Dorian Grey without his portrait… love it
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😊
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Love it. you played well with these words 🙂
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Thank you, Viv! 🙂
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Alas, poor Dorian
Your grey days are coming
When vanity is no longer fair.
Nicely done,
namaste
JzB
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🙂
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Luv the crafted rhyme for this one Kim
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena! Much love to you to and have a wonderful weekend.
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Ouch! Not a happy ending for sure. Your chosen words fit him to the teeth… Well, the ones he has left.
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😊
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Oh, this is perfect. Your’re so vain until “one day the fickle fair will retire from your snout.” I am singing You’re so Vain in my head.
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😊
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A cleverly disguised portrait of Dorian Gray. Wonderful, Kim!
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Thank you, Sara!
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Dandy wit and kick-ass versimilitude. #methree
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Thanks Brendan!
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