“You become responsible, forever, for what you have tamed.” Antoine de Saint-Exupery
My soul was like the wind,
unleashed and flying free,
until you claimed me.
You wrapped my giggling
gales around your hands,
span my tornado
until I was dizzy,
strung up with your kite of love.
Now I am hanging
from the branches
of the highest tree –
when will you unravel me?
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif: Psyche/Soul
Susan says that, since Sumana made the last Midweek Motif “poetry about the body,” she thought poetry about psyche and soul logically followed, which is why today’s challenge is to turn our attention to themes of consciousness and unconsciousness, to soul or to Psyche herself.
The infinite power within is so beautifully captivated with the images of wind, gales, tornado…and that ‘kite of love’ is simply magical. A lovely, lovely poem, Kim.
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Thank you kindly, Sumana.
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Beautiful and poignant, Kim. Made more so by the photo!
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Thanks Frank!
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“Now I am hanging from the branches of the highest tree – when will you unravel me?” Love this!❤ This is such an incredibly exquisite poem, Kim!❤
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Thank you, Sanaa! 💟
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Ah, the whirl wind romance! Lovely images, evocative. And I just rewatched the film embroidering The Little Prince, so your epigraph really hit me. In that light, my answer is never! In another light, I would urge the narrator to extricate herself and not entangle her soul. I love that the poem has it both ways.
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🙂
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Great job, and the last line just clinches it!
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Thank you, Sue!
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Absolutely beautiful. I’m fascinated by both words and the image.
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Thank you!
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I wouldn’t wait for long….
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🙂
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Lol!
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Superb! 😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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So well done Kim. The close – perfect.
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna 😊
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“When?” It’s a variation of “How long?” which appears frequently in the Bible. And the question is never answered…
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Such a beautiful take on the prompt. In a few lines, you have told a long story of joy, romance, and melancholy. Sharing it on twitter.
–Nimi
http://www.LyricalQuest.in
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Thank you for your appreciation, Mimi, and for the Twitter share!
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Hmmm. How can one possibly hope to tame something that can be felt yet remain unseen?
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Metaphorically 😊
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An yes!
But let’s not forget you are a woman.
Are you perhaps referring to the tale: The Taming of The Shrew.
He’ll hath no fury as a woman scorned.
There is after all a reason hurricanes given feminine names.
🙂
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Lovely choice of words. Such a happy upbeat feel to this poem.
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Thank you.
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Loved this even more upon the second time reading ❤️❤️ Exquisitely drawn, Kim 😀
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Thank you Sanaa.😊
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A lovely second reading. The close keeps me pondering….
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Thank you, Sumana.
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I like this. I interpreted it as a romantic tease, a love poem of sorts. Then I read your comment about Susan. I must go back and read again.
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Thank you, Myrna.
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I love the quote that inspired this poem. Great write, especially your closing lines.
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Thanks Sherry.
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Oh my oh my, luv where love took you. A delightful poem
Much❤🕊❤love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love to you. ❤
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The image–both the words and the picture–is very striking.
I always tend to interpret love poems negatively as romantic love has been something in my life which never went right and now I avoid it like the proverbial plague.
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My soul was like the wind,
unleashed and flying free,
until you claimed me. Gorgeous
Another beauty of a poem
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Thanks Marja!
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