You lift my hair like a cool breeze
and kiss my ear;
I’m the only one who’ll hear
in the thundering
silence of early morning.
Everyone else is asleep
or deaf to the poem that hums
in my head, thrums
like a guitar string, chatters
like the sparrows
in the hedgerows.
Even when you trumpet,
an elephant-grey cloud
in an otherwise clear sky,
nobody hears – only I
interpret your Morse code
of raindrops , transcribe the whisper
of the wind into words on paper
or pixels on a screen, recording
our morning conversations.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads The Poem as a One-Sided Conversation and linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night
Kerry asks if we ever get the feeling we’re talking to ourselves. She wonders if we have long conversations with ourselves or say a lot but no one’s listening.
Kerry has shared poem by Mary Oliver, entitled ‘Every Morning’, to inspire us to celebrate the poem as a one-sided conversation.
Such a wonderful closeness.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful, Kim!
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Thank you, Frank!
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😇
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“transcribe the whisper of the wind into words on paper”.. gosh this is so beautiful, Kim!💗❤
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Thank you, Sanaa! 🙂
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“only I interpret your Morse code of raindrops” that is lovely, Kim, and a unique way to express it.
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Thank you, Debi.
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So this is how your beautiful words come about…? Magical!
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Thanks Viv! My muse is a morning one!
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I noticed! 🙂
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Wow! Kim, I can’t believe the points of confluence between your poem and mine – I did not read it before I wrote mine: The humming sound and the computer screen awaiting the first word of the day… we writers have so much in common.
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We do. I just read yours and it blew me away.
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Excellent! 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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🙂
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I like those morning conversations with a poem.
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A wonderful way to start the day Kim, I especially love ‘the poem that hums in my head, thrums like a guitar string, chatters like the sparrows in the hedgerows’ xxx
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Thank you, Xenia! xxx
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On my “About Me” page on my blog I wrote: “I love to write, and would often ‘write’ things in my head that I never committed to paper. That’s why I decided to blog. To make room in my head for more.” I never thought of the things I write as one-sided conversations, but now I will. Love how you committed this one to paper (or screen).
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Thank you, Linda.
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” only I
interpret your Morse code
of raindrops”
Loved it !
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My favorite lines:
“Everyone else is asleep
or deaf to the poem that hums
in my head, thrums
like a guitar string, chatters
like the sparrows
in the hedgerows.”
Your imagery is phenomenal everything about this poem speaks abstract in its art.
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Thank you so much, Charlie, for your appreciation and encouragement.
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You welcome, Kim. It’s always great to read many different minds that create such amazing works.
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I feel like this is not just a one-sided conversation, but I feel that this is from a state between sleep and being awake… love how you paint it with sounds and draw inspiration from the picture
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The poem came first, Bjorn – I had to search for a suitable image to illustrate it. It took ages before I found it!
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I can relate to the self talk or the 1 sided conversation. Love your poem Kim!
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Thank you, Grace!
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What wonderful self-talk! Your words are magic, Kim. I applaud you!
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Thank you, Bev. You’re very kind.
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kaykuala
transcribe the whisper
of the wind into words on paper
or pixels on a screen, recording
our morning conversations.
the passion and desire to be able to relate with another must be strong. Only then it brings positive results !
Hank
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So true, Hank!
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If I copied down my favorite phrases in this, I would copy the whole poem. I’ll content myself with this bit: only I interpret your Morse code of raindrops , transcribe the whisper of the wind into words on paper –
what beautiful words you write!
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Thank you, Toni. Your comments mean so much to me.
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I’ve taken to write in the early pre-dawn mornings now, and know what you mean by feeling like I’m the only one hearing that hum, that guitar string vibrating in the sky and in my head, as if the two were one. Your poem illustrates so well the relationship of the interpreter and the muse.
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The best time to write, Amaya. 🙂
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Oh, Kim- this is such a fabulous conversation with your poetry!
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Thank you, Candy!
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Transcribing the whisper of the wind to words on paper…. Beautiful!
dwight
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Thank you kindly, Dwight 🙂
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Wonderful memo to the beloved on the other side of every poem. And that hum!
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Cheers Brendan!
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A pleasure to read what goes on inside your head ~~
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Thank Yuri for reading, Helen!
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And so the conversation continues each morning. Thanks for the kiss! I love this poem.
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Thank you, Annell. 💋
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Such a vibrant and descriptive language to offer us a glimpse into that conversation. Spellbinding..
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Thank you, Paul.
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The word dance that seems to be constantly in motion, even in the breathless silence of dawn, or as the hustle and shuffle unfolds in the day – words are constantly in play – but these treasured moments of quiet are amazing. A delicious and very sensuous poem Kim – and if this is self-talk at it’s finest, then may you be blessed for many more moments like this.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful and thoughtful, like the (hopefully) never-ending song of nature for those who would listen.
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Thank you, Sascha!
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“You lift my hair like a cool breeze
and kiss my ear; then wiser the sweet nothings of the wind decoded from the Morse.
Liking this a lot, Kim. Da di dah
..
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It takes a poet to hear those whispers – you make it come to life with so much gentleness and love and beauty!
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Thank you!
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The bird chatter, the elephants, the rain and wind – reading this poem was sheer delight.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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“Everyone else is asleep
or deaf to the poem that hums
in my head, thrums”
I can so relate… most of my family NEVER read my poems – and that’s OK… it’s really my voice, my creative outlet… for me. A silent part of me, really … a “conversation” I suppose – I’ve never thought of it like this before but well, there it is. Yes, I relate to your poetic words here.
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Thank you, Margaret.
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