Last Saturday I left home a mother and made a journey of just over four hours to visit my daughter and look after her home while she was in hospital. The train journey was chilly and the landscape covered by a blanket of snow, with the constant worry that at some point the train might not be able to go any further, so it was a relief to alight at London’s King’s Cross Station and descend into the tunnels of the Underground and the warmth of a crowded carriage. After a change of line and another over-ground train, I arrived in Surrey, where there was no snow at all. It was a difficult start to the week but finally, on a warmer sunny day, my grandson was brought into the world with the first breaths of spring and crocuses blooming in next-door’s garden. This Saturday I returned home a very happy grandmother.
blackbirds start to sing
knowing winter’s worst has passed
tomorrow blossoms
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #23 Kamishibai, the art of story telling
In this new weekend meditation, the challenge is to create a haibun and be a storyteller like Basho – with a few rules:
Our haibun have a maximum of 250 words (including the haiku). The haiku in our haibun must be classical: 5-7-5 syllables, a season word, a cuttingword, an interchangeable first and third line, a deeper meaning and of course nature. The haiku has to be that really short moment similar to the sound of a pebble thrown into water – and our haibun must be on the theme of springtime.
Congratulations ! A very happy and touching event !
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Thank you, Virginia!
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Congratulations with this wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing your story with us. You have written it in a wonderful way. I feels like being there with you to celebrate this happiness.
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A big thank you, Kristjaan. I wish I could see the little guy every day.
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Many Congratulations. Fantastic News and Spring arrives maybe.
xxx Huge Hugs xxx
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Thanks for the kind wishes and hugs, David. I came home yesterday and am missing the little chap and his little cuddles. 😊
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Congratulations again–and lovely haibun!
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Thank you, Merrill! 😊
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You tell this story well. And a double Happy Mother’s day to you ! 🙂 🙂
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Thank you, Viv! I hope you had a Mother’s Day. This is going to be a weird week – I’m still catching up!
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I did, thanks! Well, your status HAS changed… so you’ve got new responsibilities. Please pass on any tid-bits of useful info to those of us still coming along (I’ve got 2 girls in their 20’s)
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I’ve just come back from a presentation to 5 and 6 year olds at the library, for which I prepared a scavenger hunt. I popped in the local baby shop and came away with two cotton hats and three babygros, all for under £12! All the clothes they’ve been given are far too big for him but the two I bought originally from that shop fit him perfectly, so I got the same size in different patterns and colours. I must stop spending all my pension on baby clothes!
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😂😂- get those clothes on him quick! From the pic I’ve seen of him, he won’t be that small for much longer!!
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How lovely. Happy mother’s day and congratulations.
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Thank you! I’m still numb with joy!
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So Splendidness Awesome.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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🙂
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Lovely and joyous haibun. The haiku is happy and full of hope. Congratulations again!
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Thank you, Toni! It was taking ages to catch up so I gave up trying! But I am ready for this week’s prompts.
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Congratulations, Kim, to you and your family. 🙂
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Thank you, Sue. I’m still amazed – my grandson is so beautiful!
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Grandchildren go staight to your heart…and have you hooked 🙂
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Congratulations…and spring cooperated in a beautiful way 🙂
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Thank you, Janice 😊
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: Kim Russell’s latest #haibun for Carpe Diem!
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Thank you for the reblog, Frank!
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