Early this morning
the sky screamed at me
a red warning
that echoed off branches
and filled the garden
with icy chill
so I filled my lungs
with daybreak
and screamed back.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Scream
Sumana asks us if we have ever come to that point when we wanted to scream at ourselves or at the world; if we have ever come across anyone, anything, screaming. She wants us to write about screaming.
My poem was inspired by a photograph I took at around six o’clock this morning and the title is taken from the old saying: ‘Red sky at night, shepherd’s delight; red sky in the morning, shepherd’s warning’.
Lovely!
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Thank you! I love it when a poem falls into my lap!
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Loved the attitude! Scream back, fight back
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Nothing like a good scream!
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Now that’s a surprise ending, and feisty too
much love…
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We must maintain the first, Gillena! Much love to you 😊
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I love this! We are also forces of nature!
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Thank you, Susan!
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So much power and beauty here. Thank you, thank you 🙂
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😊
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I love this, and that picture is stunning with the merging colours
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Thank you!
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I can see the colours as I read!
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😊
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I totally enjoyed this!
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Thanks Bekkie!
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Oh yes, this is a lovely feeling. Brilliant shot as well!
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Thank you, Khaya!
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sometimes a good scream is good for the soul… 🙂
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When we lived right on the coast, I used to love screaming at the sea 😉
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Well it is certainly better than bottling it up. Hope you haven’t any close neighbors that will come running wanting to know what’s up?
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Thanks Robin – I think our neighbours are used to us after 18 years but I save screams for open fields and the beach!
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well done!
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Thank you, Maureen!
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Fantastic.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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