past a clump of daffodils,
wild and self-willed,
tangled
in the tall grass
where the bindweed grows.
In corkscrew branches,
a sunlit wood pigeon mutters
a throaty warning for pilgrims
to this place of Salix magic
where Nature is budding
green curtains of respectability
to replace her tattered rags of dignity.
Kim M. Russell, 3rd April 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Holy Places
This Tuesday, Amaya is hosting Poetics with a quote about the Paris-based, Arab poet, Adonis, and how he views the Holy Land, and ‘The Pilgrim’, a poem by Sophie Jewett, which she hopes will inspire us to explore questions about destinations to reach the divine; personal pilgrimages; and personal places of worship or contemplation.
I love the word widdershins … sounds like a pagan ritual, but I think the rebirth at spring gives us all a spiritual connection to nature.
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The word originates from Middle High German and means to go counter-clockwise, to go anti-clockwise, or to go lefthandwise, or to walk around an object by always keeping it on the left. I learned it when I was a child and loved the sound of it!
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I’d rather be with your wood pigeon than with those suicidal masses at Mecca.
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I hate crowds but I love the murmuring of wood pigeons.
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I’m with you there.
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The dentritic tangle of roots and branches, who knows how many millions of synapses are released from them? Your poem is a celebration of wildness and it makes me want to go out under the box elder, bathe in its soil and look up where it writes scribbly poems against the sky.
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Your comment is a poem on its own, Amaya!
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I like the last two lines–budding curtains of respectability and rags of dignity.
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I have to admit, I was quite pleased with them 🙂
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What a word…..had no idea it existed. I love this word. if the snow ever disappears it will soon be the queen of the May.
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Again, Marvelous scenes. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Enjoyed this earthy ordinariness filled with poetics.
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Thank you, Sabio.
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I loved this description of Spring! It felt like we were really there.
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This morning it seems as if I am really there!
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I see in your poem the mixing of the secular and the sacred in your flowers blooming in the tall grass and weeds. A good lesson for all of us.
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight.
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I love the sense of magic in spring here. The sound and rhythm of your words here–this is definitely a poem to be read aloud. And that title deserves a prize. 🙂
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Thank you, Merril! 🙂
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I loved this line: “to replace her tattered lines of dignity.” Wonderful piece of poetry!
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Thank you, Jo!
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Holy is Nature aLWays
More Colorful
Than
Words
alone as
Words do attempt
to Express the Holy allone
oF Nature Kingdom Come now..:)
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The title alone made me want to break out in song..such a beautiful rhythm. Love your word choices here….”wild and self-willed”….oh yes! I do believe that nature can be spiritual.
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Thanks Mish! I’ve loved that word ‘widdershins’ since I was little.
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very visual Kim – I can hear the wood pigeons resenting the intrusive pilgrim
p,s, widdershins would make a good name for a cat I think as long as it did not need calling too often 😉
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It would have to be a witch’s cat!
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a white one I hope!
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My Luna is black and white!
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I like how your poem so vividly invokes nature, in whose midst I often find holy places!
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Nature is the original holy place.
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