Dawdling spring starts to lift
winter’s dreich and brumy veil
from saturated inky hills,
revealing cobalt palimpsests
on elephantine grey.
Outcrops of land-slid indigo
form walls dividing pitch and roll,
cross ragged seams of paths and tracks
through brown and ochre soil
riddled with lumps of flint and shale.
In the distance, a sliver of silver
threads its way behind the hills,
the powerful current of Coniston Water
carving the rocks into a vale.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Fay Collins
This week we have a new bartender, the lovely Sarah Connor. She says that although dVerse has ‘done’ ekphrastic poetry before, the beauty of ekphrasis is that every artist is different, as is every poet, so the result is always fresh.
Sarah has introduced us to Fay Collins, an artist working in the North West of England, who produces beautiful images of the natural world. Sarah has Fay’s permission to share her work with us and says she hopes the subject matter, the depth of colour and the emotional interpretation she brings to it will inspire us to produce amazing poems.
Sarah says that Fay mainly works in oils, oil pastels and water colours, though she has produced some limited edition print runs. She is inspired by “the complexities of nature and landscape”, and the way the landscape changes with the fickle weather of the north of England.
For this Poetics prompt, all we have to do is choose a picture, and let it inspire our words.
I love how you capture the harshness of spring in those words of grey with just a glimpse of silver… April is the cruelest month…
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Thank you, Bjorn! We’ve had sunshine the past couple of days and it’s glorious – not too hot and not too cold, with a gentle breeze. My washing is dry!
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A lovely piece, Kim.
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Thank you, Annell!
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Kim, this is gorgeous. I love the way you use the colour palette, and I really love that final glimmer of silver, like the merest hope of Spring. It’s hard to know which came first, the painting or the poem.
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Thank you, Sarah! I was torn between this picture and the one of the dead bird, but this one won because of the colours.
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This is word-painting Kim. All those blues!
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Thank you, Jane. Blue is my second favourite colour after black. 😉
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How funny! That was my choice age five!
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🙂
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Fantabulous scenery. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thanks Dorna!
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Water does seem to love stone.
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It’s something I want to explore in another poem.
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I love the picture that you have painted with your words it matches the image and the area so well. XX
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Thank you, Alison!
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I love how you introduced the colors here Kim. Well done!
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Thanks Linda!
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My pleasure!
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Wonderful colours!
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Thank you, Jo!
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Such a dramatic landscape you described Kim ~ Love the rich colors: indigo, brown, ochre and:
revealing cobalt palimpsests
on elephantine grey.
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Thank you so much, Grace. It was hard to choose among the beautiful artwork. I’m glad this one spoke to me.
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Swooning over this: “Outcrops of land-slid indigo”
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Thank you so much, Ash!
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Well done Kim.
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna 🙂
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kaykuala
Perfect descriptive account right from the first stanza. Thanks for an array of new words, Kim!
Hank
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Thanks Hank!
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Ah the words! They sing!
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Thank you so much!
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I love the water carving the rocks into a vale!
Dwight
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Thanks Dwight!
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The opening verse was splendid. I had to smile at Dawdling spring – I am beginning to wonder how long spring might dawdle?
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Thank you. I hope spring gets to you soon. I’ll give her a bit of a push!
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It snowed here in Pennsylvania today. Spring may never come, although the forsythia is trying hard to cheer us. I love “dawdling spring.” Exactly as it seems here.
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We’ve been lucky so far this week with glorious spring weather I hope it gets to you soon, Sarah.
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Powerful imagery! I hope you’ve been enjoying today’s happy sun😉
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It’s been glorious, Viv! But most of the activities today have been inside – the only thing I did in the open air was hang washing out!
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Get out there and join us- the sun worshippers 😊
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Had to look up a couple of words. I love the description of Spring’s colors.
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Thank you, Mary!
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Just beautiful, Kim!
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Thank you, Bekkie!
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A wondrous complexity in this poem that fits that painting so precisely. Love it!
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Thanks Jill!
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Wonderful !
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Thank you!
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