She embroiders blossom
on a blackthorn’s bladed barbs,
pricking fingers frozen into claws
her face wet with spit
and spindrift of words
that writhe like water in a weir.
Language is drowned
by the thunder
of gushing water in her ears.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads NaPoWriMo: An Antic Disposition
Kerry says that, since today is the anniversary of Shakespeare’s birth and death, she has delved into the archives to read up on what he had to say about madness… a favoured theme in several plays and poems. She came across an interesting article, for which she has share a link, as well as a few memorable quotes, but they are by no means prescriptive.
Our focus for this prompt is The Mind: those troubles of the brain, shaping fantasies and antic dispositions which make us human.
one of the best April personification poems ever Kim – that opening is simply brilliant
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Laura!
LikeLike
Just a stunning piece of writing. I love the work of Morris and this is a favourite. You words add sublime embellishment. Wonderful.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Paul. Your comments give me encouragement.
LikeLike
Sharply and shrilly done — excellent weave. Leaves one to wonder if Ophelia was the ghost of Maid Marian.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Brendan.
LikeLike
Such an incredible personification of April, Kim!💜 I love “Language is drowned by the thunder of gushing water in her ears.”💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sanaa!
LikeLike
A wonderful personification of April (whom I am tempted to rename Ophelia).
LikeLike
“That writhe like water in a weir” and they certainly do. Exceptional Kim 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Ellecee! 🙂
LikeLike
April for sure is embroiderer to meadow and garden… Nice
Much🌼love
LikeLiked by 1 person
Much love to you, Gillena!
LikeLike
Wonderful stuff !
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! This is fabulous, Kim. When I got to the word ‘pricked’, I immediately saw Macbeth’ witches (by the pricking of my thumbs, something wicked this way comes). Your language is so lush, every line is memorable. And I love the graphic element too.. that is so well chosen.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Kerry!
LikeLike
April has never appeared so fiesty. Brilliant write!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Viv!
LikeLike
WOW! I LOVE this. It is PERFECT. I especially love the blackthorn’s bladed barbs. Exceptionally good.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sherry!
LikeLike
I really love this… and the weaving of the Morris pattern adds so much to it given the effect of the Scheele’s green. Arsenic poisoning is an unfortunate side-effect of wall-papers.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Bjorn. I love William Morris. When Ellen was still quite little, my father was caretaker at William Morris Middle School. I used to visit them quite a lot then, long before I moved to Norfolk, and Mum and I visited the library to find out more about him. Beautiful designs but, as you say, they could be lethal.
LikeLike
You had me at these lines, alone:
“She embroiders blossom
on a blackthorn’s bladed barbs,”
And then you went on! Wonderful write, Kim!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Frank!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love this original description of spring! Well done in words and pairing it with the work of William Morris – one of my favorite artists.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Margaret.
LikeLike
Oh goodness, you have written one of the best April poems I’ve ever read.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Susie! You’ve made me blush!
LikeLike
There are times, that maddness comes to us all. Beautiful poem and beautiful image!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Annell!
LikeLike