I found the first one of spring
on my windowsill, just bee-ing,
when it should have been
meadowing with a swarm,
oceaning a roar,
pollening and sweetnessing
with honeyed kissing.
Instead, it’s dead,
Just bee-ing.
Kim M. Russell, 30th April 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Thirty poems in April: a final in verbs
Bjorn is our host for the final day of April and the last poems of NaPoWriMo. As he says, today we have reached the end of madhousing and voicing and some of us should be proud overachievers who have written a poem every day in April. Bjorn wants to talk verbs, whose words that turn the wheels and are so much more interesting than other word classes.
Bjorn says, that the world of words is filling up with things, warehouses filling up with objects: innate and passive, they sit there, waiting for way too few verbs to put them in action. He has a solution – verbing. The word verb is a noun, but verbing a verb turns verb into verb. Bjorn says that we can do the same with almost any verb and he wants us to try it.
“bee-ing”. I love it.
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Thank you, Chris!
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Oh I love “pollening and sweetnessing”… fabulous write, Kim! 💜
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Thank you, Sanaa! I’ll have to catch up with reading later – I have a hospital appointment this afternoon, so I’m writing poetry and moderating exams before I leave.. I hope you’ve had a good start to the week! 🙂
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Another Remarkable poem. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thanks Dorna! 🙂
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Wonderful but sad too. Poor bee. He should have been honey kissising (love) instead of being dead. Great write. My bees are starting their sucking up of sugar water for the summer. I love bees.
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Do you keep bees, Toni? Or do they just swarm to your magical garden? 🙂
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Liking your “bee-ing’s”, Kim. We are running short of ‘bees’ in Texas, perhaps your kind could help the pollination of the fruit trees.
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We have a similar bee problem here. I think they are trying to encourage a new generation of bee keepers but I don’t know how successful that will be(e).
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Oh, sad! But beautifully written. I love the pun of “bee-ing”, and the wonderful verbing of “meadowing with a swarm, / oceaning a roar, / pollening and sweetnessing”. And who could fail to warm to the “honeyed kissing”? Long may our bees survive!
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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I love the verbing in this poem and…poor bee. (Love the “bee-ing”.)
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Thank you, Sherry. Do you know the old saying? A swarm of bees in May is worth a load of hay; a swarm of bees in June is worth a silver spoon; and a swarm of bees in July isn’t worth a fly. There isn’t one for April, so I imagine my poor bee arrived far too early, considering the snow and rain – brought to life by a short spell of warm weather.
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A fitting ending for the mad month of April. Poor bee. But alas, time is due when time is up – but you’ve did a great job with the verbing!
It’s been wonderful to share and read with you this month Kim. Cheers and happy trailings.
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Thank you! It’s been a great NaPoWriMo and I’ve read so many wonderful poems. Thanks for reading and commenting. 😉
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my pleasure Kim, it was quite the trip! And good luck with finding some semblance of “normal” now – especially since you’re in the heart of exam time etc. Hope you catch your breath!
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I had a little patch of non-activity and then it all started to happen. I’m on the runaway exam train now until July!
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oh wow – that’s a stretch – good luck with it – and I hope you find time to stretch your wings and just breathe!
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Nice!!!
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena! 🙂
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I love all the verbing, but the beeing is of course a great example in it self… To bee or not to bee… hope there are enough out there meadowing.
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Thanks Bjorn!
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it should have been
meadowing with a swarm…
That is just awesome, Kim.
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Thank you, Kerry!
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Simple but so hugely effective Kim. Well done for getting through the mad month. Been a pleasure to be along for the ride again.
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Thanks Paul. It’s been interesting to see how many of us kept up, despite all our different schedules, jobs and lifestyles. I’m already looking forward to next April!
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Poor little bee. You reminded me of one time, a bee was trapped inside my window. I crushed a paper towel and put it over him, to try to rescue him. I swear, he said, “Help me!” And I did, he flew away….to live happily ever after.
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Ah! The life of a bee! Love the sweetnessing 😊
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🐝
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