Although chemistry
remains a mystery
to me,
I love
the combination
of hydrogen and oxygen:
liquid that flows and trickles
and
drips,
fills lakes and oceans,
floats ships, quenches thirst
and washes clean,
sparkling foam,
currents and waves,
and the way the invisible
turns blue.
Kim M. Russell, 9th May 2018
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif: Water, also linked to earthweal open link weekend #68
Sumana has chosen water as this week’s motif and has shared quotes and poems to inspire us. She says that those who live in an arid, desert land know too well how precious water is also others take it or granted. She also tells us that water plays an important role in many legends and myths in every culture all over the world. Our poems today may include everything concerned with water from ancient times to our present day, and mythological water beings, gods, goddesses, dragons, naiads etc. are welcome.
I love the way the invisible turns blue! Both above and below!
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Amen to that! Chemical and mystical and real.
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What a lovely poem. I love your water and its uses and especially that the invisible turns blue! And on our side of the ocean, the ocean is green! Lovely.
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Thank you, Toni! I’m struggling to keep up with reading and commenting – the dreaded exam season has taken over and I’m so tired. But I’ll continue to write in the early hours. 😊
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you caught the magic of water…. great write
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Than you so much!
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Kim – your words go from strength to strength – you are indeed a poet! Kudos!
Anna :o]
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Thank you for your kind comments, Anna!
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One of my students asked me just today if I knew what hydrogen and oxygen made when mixed. I said ” oh hang on, I need to get a drink.” He watched me take a drink and just chuckled as he walked away. I love, love, love when students get my jokes! Thanks for this. I will share this with him.
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Thank you!
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kaykuala
liquid that flows and trickles
and drips,fills lakes and oceans,
floats ships, quenches thirst
and washes clean, sparkling foam,
An option is not to be made but an assurance of survival, it is!
Hank
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It certainly is, Hank!
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Yes …it’s a magical substance to be cherished respected and conserved.Good poem.
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Thank you, Rall.
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Water like so many other things we take for granted and often forget how precious it is in keeping us alive. Now all we want is to convince the rest of the world how valuable it is. Beautiful accompanying photo!
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Thank you, Robin! I took that photograph on a very sunny day on the Norfolk Broads.
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Aah…I find water spirit playing here. So tiny yet so vast. Beautiful, Kim.
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Thank you, Sumana.
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A wonderful poem!
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Thank you, Annell!
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Luv the intrigue you have weaved into this water mystery Kim
Much love…
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Thank you, Gillena. 💚
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I’m not good at chemistry either, but I do love water, as do you!
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😊
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Where would we be without liquid blue H2O? I like the shape of this Kim, how you’ve made the words flow like water!
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Thanks Ingrid!
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Both chemistry and how it sustains life are a beautiful mystery. (K)
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Thanks Kerfe!
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Well, it’s my favorite element, so you’re preaching to the choir — your poem flow down, glistening and infilling and spilling over at the end with that fantastic trope turning blue “the invisible.” The sidhe is blue! Great one Kim! – Brendan
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I’m pleased you like it, Brendan!
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This poem flows with your subject, refreshes and sparkles!
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Cheers Kim!
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Perhaps the most vital thing on earth – water………loved your poem, water dripping through rivers and oceans……..
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Thank you,, Sherry!
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I like the shape of this, as well as your delicate depiction of this yet most-powerful compound ~
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Thank you, Michael.
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