A summer-born child, I lived in my head,
I drew, wrote, sang and read,
peopling worlds with invisible friends
to fill the space where reality ends.
Now I feel winter creep into my bones
and my poetic graffiti covers the stones,
written in lichen of saffron and green;
childhood’s buried where it can’t be seen.
But gravestones speak of lives lived and lost,
omitting the parts that weigh up the cost.
I enter the graveyard through gates in my head
to record all the stories I hear from the dead.
Kim M. Russell, 5th June 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Getting Personal also shared on Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Amaya is tending bar today for what she says is the one and only dVerse Speed Dating Night. In honour of the 199th anniversary of Walt Whitman’s birth, she wants us to be inspired by his magnum opus, ‘Song of Myself.’
She asks us to imagine we are writing personal ads and write poems that show our intended audiences who we are, not who we want the world to see.
Amaya says that there’s a lot of freedom with this prompt, but to remember to proclaim and celebrate ourselves as if our soul mates at the other end of the universe would recognize us.
Kim this is such a special poem. The whole last stanza murmurs to me of a life well lived. It is truly a song of yourself.
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Thank you, Toni.
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This is wonderful – I love its melancholic tone!
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Thank you, Jo!
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Nice last stanza. I like the idea of invisible friends telling their stories.
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Thank you, Frank.
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I’m with you in the graveyard.
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They are peaceful places.
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Perhaps that is the most important thing about them, leaving out the ghosts. They let us think without obligations muscling in.
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In the silence after, there is salways someone speaking, even in whispers. Beautiful write.
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Thank you, Annell.
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We would have made good friends, then and now!
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🙂
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I love that special summer child
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Thank you, Candy!
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This was a great piece – you’ve crafted something profound here.
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Thank you.
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And we’re in the front rower if your active musings…. brava!
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Thanks Viv!
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*row*
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kaykula
peopling worlds with invisible friends
to fill the space where reality ends.
Perhaps it is a good way of keeping one’s wits intact!
Hank
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It is, but parents never seem to think so!
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So profoundly beautiful. Our departed do live in our heads. I especially loved “omitting the parts that weigh up the cost”. There sure is a lot of subtext in those gravestone hyphens isn’t there!
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Thank you! I love that phrase ‘gravestone hyphens’, Lona. It would make a great title. 🙂
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Lovely and contemplative. I hear my childhood speak but I wouldn’t call it a friend. Mostly, even though it was full of good things, not all but enough, its ghost haunts me, begging me to take it along forever. Purgatory. Things will never be so romantic or delicate as a dreamy childhood.
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Thank you, Amaya. I spent a lot of my early childhood on my own (with invisible friends) but when I moved from my grandparents’ house to my parents’ home on a housing estate, I found some flesh and blood friends to run around with.
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Great Poem Kim. Love the idea that the stones only tell the beginning and the end but not all the hardships in between!
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Thanks Dwight!
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SMiLes
Best
Gravestones now
Leave Love AHead..:)
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🙂
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🙂
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Our mind can be a great escapade and a heaven and hell both for us!
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It certainly can!
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But gravestones speak of lives lived and lost,
omitting the parts that weigh up the cost…. absolutely…like that!
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Thank you, Rajani!
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This is lovely!💜 I feel like I have stumbled upon a hidden part of your heart and soul in this poem.. 💜
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Thank you so much, Sanaa. 💟🌹😊
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love these lines especially:
‘and my poetic graffiti covers the stones,
written in lichen of saffron and green;’
beautiful poem
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Thank you kindly.
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This has such a strong structure, Kim, and the words and ideas sing in beautiful melody. I love the descriptions of stanza 2, but really the whole poem is so cohesive it is hard to single out one part of it.
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Thank you so much, Kerry.
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I was also a child who lived in her head. Since I don’t have any grandchildren and my family tree won’t grow limbs I wonder at what I leave to the world. I guess words are my legacy. I hope someone down the years will find some worth in them. This is a beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Susie.
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Written in lichen of saffron and green…
These details are beautiful.
Winter creeping into bones .. from childhood through the seasons. So well done.
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Thank you, Lill!
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