ebony raven
snowy owl
coal-black carrion ghost
pristine white spirit
wing-clipped to the Tower
free-flying in the Arctic
croaking strutting shadows
low and silent
hugging walls of stone
over treeless wastes.
Kim M. Russell, 26th June 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Opposites attract, or do they? also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Lillian is here again to host our Tuesday Poetics and she’s been thinking about antithesis. She says that opposites can be as simple as cold/hot; happy/sad; inside/outside, or as complex as looking at one event or object from two different perspectives.
She explains that the literary device of antithesis places two opposite ideas together to achieve a contrasting effect, as in the opening of Charles Dickens’ A Tale of Two Cities: ‘It was the best of times, it was the worst of times…’
Lill has given us wide latitude in how we use the literary device of antithesis / opposites. She asks us to write one poem that includes words that have opposite meanings OR write two short poems about one event, each written from a different perspective or voice OR take a well known nursery rhyme or parable and rewrite it in the opposite.
LOVE the image and your words! Love the spacing too. Somehow, these words, most especially resonate with me:
“wing-clipped to the Tower
free-flying in the Arctic”
I can sense the “stuck” and the “soaring” — the prison and the freedom.
So very well done. So glad you posted!
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I always felt sorry for the ravens at the Tower of London. It’s cruel to clip their wings – does anyone really believe the tower will fall if they leave?
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The two images of the snowy owl and the ravens weaved together works so well in their opposites…
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Thanks Bjorn.
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Love the structure. The back and forth between the images makes me want to tap my foot as I read it.
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When I looked at it again, I could see feathers!
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I love your ‘opposite’ poem!
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Thank you, Jo!
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I love how you spaced this – read together or the right side and the left – both are lovely in their beauty and opposites of each other. three poems in one!
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Thanks Toni!
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Love the contrasting images of ebony raven and snowy owl ~ Now that Toni has commented on the spacing, it can read as 3 poems in one ~ Cheers !
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Thankyou, Grace!
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Brilliant antithesis, Kim!
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Thank you, Frank!
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My pleasure, Kim! 😇
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Nice pairing of those two opposite-colored birds.
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Thanks Frank.
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I love that ebony raven and snowy owl…..and adore the image too.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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This is a good response to this prompt. I like the layout you have used.
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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The dark and the bright sides of humans!
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Such an interesting form.. I read it vertically as well as two different pieces.
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Nice cleave – perfect structure for this prompt. I love the contrast between your birds, and your awareness of the tragedy of being trapped.
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Thanks Sarah.
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I love the structure of your poem Kim 💜 It feels as though imagery and contrasts dancing together side by side in harmony! Beautiful! 😍😍
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I love the structure of your poem Kim!💜 It feels as though imagery and structure dancing together side by side in harmony. Beautiful! 😍😍
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Your paired lines are beautifully evocative and the contrast creates immediate impact. This is so well done.
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Thank you, Kerry.
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Love the structure of your poem, Kim! 💞 It feels as though imagery and contrasts are dancing together side by side in harmony! 😍😍
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I love the structure of your poem, Kim! 💞 It feels as though imagery and contrasts dancing together side by side in harmony 🙂
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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I love the flow of contrasts here. It makes for a head-turning scene😊
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Thank you, Viv. 🙂
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I love this, Kim. Also I lived it the first time I visited the London Tower. Those Ravens were the first I’d ever seen, they were the largest birds I’d seen as well. So pretty, large and ebony black, not bothered by the tourists at all.
But the snow white owl, I’m not sure. The should have been in New Hampshire (we once lived there ) or in Iceland, Nova Scotia, or the Yukon. Next time we go North I’ll look them up even if it’s at zoo.
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That’s one thing I always envied birds, their freedom, which is why I hate to see caged ones and those poor old ravens at the Tower. Although, you’re right, they don’t seem to mind the tourists. Some got the fired – one for stealing – I’m pleased they didn’t chop off his head!
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kaykuala
croaking strutting shadows
low and silent
hugging walls of stone
over treeless wastes.
Opposites perfectly told, Kim. All these make the world go round and turn them to lots of interesting episodes!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank!
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Nicely laid out, like the rhythm too.
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“Let me fly free over the treeless wastes!” Lona whispers with supercilious intent while reclining comfortably in her stone tower… 😏
Nicely done Kim!
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Thank you, Lona!
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A write deep on many levels.
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Thank you, Annell.
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Love the contrast between the subjects.
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Thank you.
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