In the middle of a hot
and breezeless night,
I’m drenched in sweat
and wrestling with the sheet
snaked around my legs.
I’m running from a heath fire,
purple heather sizzles
into burnt sienna
and birds explode
in showers of feathers,
glowing and spitting
like fanned embers.
A sharp-winged dragon
skims the hummocks,
breathing flames
and licking tussocks
that erupt with rusty
orange butterflies,
incandescent,
flaring and roaring,
igniting dream
after dream.
Kim M. Russell, 21st July 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Weekend Challenge: A Little Night Music
Brendan is our host this weekend and he’s asking us to dream. He gives us a historical background to the study and interpretation of dreams and reminds us that artists throughout history have taken constant inspiration from dreams and that poetry is the closest thing in language we have to dreaming.
Our challenge is to pull pages from our dream-books and view them with the lens of poetry; to bring poetry and dreaming close together (or show us paradoxically how far apart they still are); to write a poem in the manner of a dream or dream in the manner of a poem.
Yikes. From your comment after the prompt you seem to dream like Kerry — they are drowning — this is certainly a dream from the bestiary, all tooth and fire. It stalks the dreamer, corners the perception. I wonder at the psychic wiring — whether this is biochemical accident or damage — whatever the cause, I think it makes you a very special poet, as your perceptions always have this crisp clarity to them. Do you revise your poems, or do they usually come out this complete? Just wondering.
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Hi Brendan. Thank you for reading so closely. My dreams are always vivid and very realistic. They don’t feel like dreams and they very often result in lines of poems and sometimes complete poems. Pretty much all the poetry I write for prompts hasn’t been revised; I do that later when I’ve gained some distance and objectivity and I’m putting something together for submission. I sometimes take an old poem and rework it for a prompt. Once I get an idea I have to get it down!
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My goodness this is good! I could literally feel the fire and picture the “birds explode in showers of feathers”.. so vivid it felt real! 🔥💕 Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Very vivid, frightening. You do dream realistic dreams! The dragon can be frightening. The images in this poem, the orange butterflies, the birds bursting into flame, all of these images attest to a realism and detail I do not have in my dreams
If I had such dreams, I don’t think I would ever go to sleep.
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That’s the thing – I fall asleep so easily but keep waking up! It’s the really realistic ones that wake me up, though.
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kaykuala
A sharp-winged dragon
skims the hummocks,
breathing flames
It can be frighteningly real as dreams always are!
Hank
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A hot night indeed – made beautifully colourful.
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Thank you, Rosemary!
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I have the hot flushes at night to wake me up.. wish they gave me such dragon-rich dreams!
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I’ve been having flushes for fifteen years now and they have only recently become less frequent. It’s fire or water for me most nights!
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OH, that is some fiery writing. It’s fierce, it’s tantalizing and all too gripping. There’s something about these drastic imagers that one can not help but be thrilled by them. A dream is such which imperils the boundaries of peace and tragedy, as does your verse.
-HA
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Thank you so much, HA.
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Vivid and the imagery is wonderful.
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Thank you, Margaret.
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Super vivid and a feeling of heat and swelter throughout–mixed in with the speed of running. Very electric. Thanks. k.
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Thank you, Karin.
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Wonderful and frightening. I love the “English” feel of this — the heather, the hummocks and tussocks, and of course the dragon breathing fire. Well done.
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Thank you, Sarah.
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That’s it! No more Game of Thrones for you, young lady!
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😁
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This poem is very apt in the middle of our hot summer, where forest fires blaze everywhere and colour the evening sunsets. I can almost feel the dragon’s fiery breath.
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We have had a warning to stay indoors, it’s so hot here, and we’ve had crop fires, unknown in this region, Our garden remains lush and green at the moment – if that should change, I will be more than worried!
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