One magnolia
Landed upon another
In the dew-wet grass
Blushing petals pink on cream
But only for a moment
Make up your mind, Snail!
You are half inside your house,
And halfway out!
You left a silver greeting
In a meandering trail
Keep straight down this block,
Then turn right where you will find
A peach tree blooming
Steeped in aromatic dreams
Soft skin and the sweetest fruit
All right, You Sparrows;
The sun has set and you can now
Stop your chattering!
Flock bare branches with your wings
Play hide and seek with the moon
I am nobody:
A red sinking autumn sun
Took my name away
I must search among shadows
Find myself again in dreams
You moths must leave now;
I am turning out the light
And going to sleep
I must rest my sleepy eyes
You must fold your winter wings
Richard Wright Kim M. Russell 30th October 2018
My response to Carpe Diem #1532 Richard Wright’s ‘A Red Sinking Autumn Sun’
Carpe Diem’s sixth anniversary month is almost over and we have reached the letter W for Richard Wright (1908-1960), author of “Native Son,” and “Black Boy” and a poet. During the last eighteen months of his life, he discovered haiku and began writing his own – in all, over 4,000 haiku. Our challenge is to create a renga with Richard Wright from six given haiku.
Very interesting Tan Renga Kim
I posted late, mine is HERE
much love…
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Thank you, Gillena. I’ve been off line since yesterday and will be over shortly!
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Another Excellent example of Explemary Poetry! (@–>–)
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Thanks Dorna!
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Exquisite renga, Kim!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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