Evening

evening comes
wrapped in sea fog
tied with webs
                                                                        untangled only by light
­                                                                        from the pale face of the moon
evening sea fog
descending into sun-dried grass
sweaty lovers
                                                                        the tang of salty kisses
­                                                                        is soothed by a cool sea breeze

Jane Reichhold                                               Kim M. Russell, 10 November 2018 

My response to Carpe Diem #1541 Evening (modern kigo)

Today in our Autumn month, we have two haiku by Jane Reichhold taken from her Dictionary of Haiku, section Autumn, subsection Celestial. The challenge is to create a short renga with the given haiku both on the theme of ‘evening’.