hot pink against snow
a capricious spindle bursts
premature blossoms
Kim M. Russell, 27th January 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1593 flowers out of season (kaeribana)
With four days to go this month, we have for more winter kigo for inspiration. Today we have a classical kigo: flowers out of season (kaeribana) and an example haiku by Kobayashi Issa:
yama-gawa no ushiro tsumetashi kaeri-bana
by a mountain stream
catching a chill…
out-of-season blooms
© Issa (Tr. David Lanoue)
This really pops! Nice contrast of ice and blossom.
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Thank you, Colleen!
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I love the haiku. Great poems!
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Thank you so much!
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Sweet! (@—>—)
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