“You are a guest of nature” (Hundertwasser)
boots crush vernal grass and clover
barley heads droop
the once living quilt of meadow
has shrivelled up and died
and the earth shivers with fear
as the sun climbs ever higher
above the blasted pasture of the biosphere
while humans bandy words like ‘zero tolerance’
they neglect to notice Mother Earth
tapping her foot with age-old sufferance
strumming her fingers with impatience
at her lodgers’ impertinence
we have outstayed our welcome
and it’s time to clear up our mess
Kim M. Russell, 7th February 2019
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Zero Tolerance, also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night
This week Susan reminds us that zero tolerance is controversial and hard to enforce, not just because one law doesn’t fit everyone but because laws are applied unevenly. However, when zero tolerance becomes a law, its job is to prevent future damage. She wonders whether changing behaviours by enforcement, which is meant to change attitudes over time, can work. She has given us two personal examples, as well as others and some interesting poems to inspire us.
Our challenge is to take one tiny piece of this vast topic and illuminate it in a new poem.
The tapping and strumming scenes are indication we have very little time. “..it’s time to clear up our mess” We better do that before She has zero tolerance for us.
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She’s stronger than we are.
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How I agree! I think the human experiment has had enough time to prove itself but has clearly failed. Not only can’t they get on with each other they are hell bent on killing all the other animal species, melting the ice caps, polluting the rivers and oceans, destroying the forests that give us air to breathe and think if it doesn’t work out the elite will be able to escape to a nearby dead planet to start over. Humans are crazy!
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It makes my blood boil, Robin.
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“living quilt of meadow” Wow. What loss! Every personification here is shivering my spine:
“tapping her foot with age-old sufferance
strumming her fingers with impatience
at her lodgers’ impertinence”
And that illustration!
BTW, I always look forward to your summary of the prompt.
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Thank you very much, Susan. 😊
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I think there are too few who have heard Mother Nature tapping…. I wonder if she’ll shed us like fleas from a pelt soon.
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My thinking exactly, Bjorn.
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Apart from ‘no comment’ – no need for one – on your poem, I wonder if a zero tolerance law isn’t the only way? They had to make a law so we should stop littering for instance. We didn’t arrive there by ourselves.
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Petru, even if laws were on the books, the overlords don’t feel they need to follow laws. they just pay their fines and call it a tax write-off. there will be no human stopping of this madness. something other will have to do it.
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I think Mother Nature will react in her own way and there will be nothing anyone can do about it.
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Probably because there won’t be anyone left to do anything about anything!
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Most futurists feel that only the 1%, bless their black hearts, will survive, using their wealth to secure passage to the stars. That is such a lovely nightmare of a premise. Terrific message within a strong poem
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Thank you, Glenn.
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Excellent Kim. I have zero tolerance for the way we are destroying our home, how we are living in the trash of our own making. The trash dumps are overfilling – one use plastics which really get to me. Disposable baby diapers for another. Mother Nature tapping her foot, the second hands on the clock ticking down…
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Kanzen, not sure if you heard about the mess — no pun intended — with baby wipes and water filtration plants? The wipes are getting flushed and are clogging up the machines that filter the water. I went to a baby shower last week and had to buy baby items for gifts. There was literally one whole side of an aisle that sold just baby wipes!
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It’ll be difficult to persuade busy working mothers to change their habits but it has to be done!
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Kim, there is a mindset that has been cultivated of instant, in-the-moment existence for young people who have never known any different. It is so discouraging…
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Thank you, Toni. Mother Nature will show us how serious she is, in no uncertain terms.
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Sadly, Kim, I feel that your poem is being preached to the converted. True magic, would be getting political leaders, like Trump (US) and Ford (Ontario), to mend their environmental pov, which growth is viewed on the positive impact that it has, on the restoration of this planet that we call home.
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I agree wholeheartedly. Those in power must set a good example and I can’t think of any so-called world leader who does. I think Mother Nature will teach us a lesson.
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My goodness such poignant and powerful imagery in this one, Kim! I agree we humans have done immense damage to earth’s heart and literally trampled upon its soul with our lack of sense and consideration for its well-being.
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Yes I agree, she is trying her best to give us a chance we just aren’t doing the right things.
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I think she’s given us plenty of warnings.
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Well said Kim – the carelessness and destruction, and Mother Earth’s growing impatience.
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Thank you, V.J.
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so welcome, Kim.
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Yes, we have outstayed our welcome. A very timely and relevant message Kim.
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Thank you, Grace.
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Too often we simply ignore the obvious because we are not willing to change! This cannot continue indefinitely!
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Until the rich and powerful set a good example, it’s going to be difficult to persuade people out of their bad habits. But we must keep trying.
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Yes!
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This is wonderful, Kim!
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Thank you, Sherry!
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Haunting images. The personification tugs at the heart strings. Where is the empathy for the earth? So used, abused and taken for granted. It is delusional to think we can continue this path of destruction.
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Thank you, Mish. I think all of us poets agree that it’s gone too far. Now we have to persuade all those who don’t give a damn – starting with the rich and powerful..
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Tapping and strumming are vivid images! But I dare say, she is lately showing her intolerance in many ways.
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I think there’s more to come.
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Nice take on unwanted house guests – renter’s who didn’t even bother to pay a security deposit.
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😊
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Mother Earth is so sad. Thanks for your poem.
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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I like the association of “zero tolerance” with what the Earth has to put up with.
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Thank you, Frank.
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I sincerely believe that the earth renews herself, thus earthquakes, ice ages, extinctions, etc. Thanks for sharing!
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I do too, Susanne! Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Yes to everything you said, Kim. No easy fix to this….
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Steve.
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I love your description of Mother Nature’s movements. We are killing future generations of humans and animals.
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Thank you, Sara.
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She’ll be here long after we’re gone, but we’re too puffed-up to realize that. Outstayed our welcome, indeed. (British/American wording difference? My brain expected ‘overstayed’.)
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🙂
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Eventually we will be stopped by our greed and ignorance…and hopefully the earth will recover as a home to species that are less arrogant. (K)
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She’s already let us know that she’s had enough, given us plenty of chances to clean up our act. It’s only a matter of time.
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What goes around, comes around…and what’s coming is a long time coming! Great write, Kim!
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Thanks Frank!
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My pleasure, Kim! 🙂
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Very true. Totally agree with you.
high time we clean up our mess.
Planet Earth is suffering terribly…
Zero Tolerance For Misinformation – Anita
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