the sky is bluer
birds are singing once again
caressed by sunshine
walkers thrust hands in pockets
surprised by a chilly breeze
Kim M. Russell, 18th February 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1608 Tan Renga Challenge Month 2019 (12) Spring is in the air
This feels very strange, creating a Tan Renga from a haiku I wrote for Carpe Diem’s new feature, ‘Poetry Archive’.
I want that caress. Thanks for the promise.
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nice one, Kim!
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Thanks!
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Kim- Congratulations! Well Deserved! It’s a beauty.
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Thank you, Linda!
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Sweet! (@—>—)
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It worked well, Kim! I like how Kristjaan took my comment “Spring is in the air!” on your original haiku to create a tan renga challenge for all of us 🙂
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