Osier wands planted in November
are almost trees.
Now’s the time when we remember
to pluck a switch or three
of willow, white with soft, sleek
buds, gold with catkins, sweet
temptation to hungry humming
bees, still drowsy and crawling
from their winter sleep.
Kim M. Russell, 6th March 2019
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Turn, Turn, Turn . . ., also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
Lillian is our host for this week’s Poetics and she’s been thinking about time. She reminds us of a wise verse from the Bible, from Ecclesiastes, which was also made into a well-known song by Pete Seeger and later recorded by The Byrds, the version I remember.
Lill has asked us to choose times mentioned in the Ecclesiastes quotation and include them word for word, in a poem OR let them motivate our poems, with no need to mention them word for word but we should be able to identify the reference OR create our own time frame and write a poem that includes the words ‘a time to _____________ ‘ and we fill in the blank.
Those drowsy humming bees make for a wonderful imager of this month and season — the arrival of spring is like waking up to the light and all that it proffers. Such a lovely verse, Kim! 🙂
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Thank you, An m ok! 😊
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Sorry Anmol – my Kindle has gremlins.
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The drowsy bees—lovely! This is full of growth and renewal. Time as a cycle.
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Thank you, Jane!
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🙂
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Your choice of words is mesmerizing: wands, soft sleek buds, hungry humming bees….
I usually think of spring as just that — springing up — an energy to it. And you’ve changed my view here with the softness, drowsiness, and the languid humming bees! 🙂 Kind of like that bear, yawning, stretching and slowing getting his balance back again! 🙂
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😊
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A beautiful write !!
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Thank you, Annell!
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You have the ability to draw wonderful word pictures, Kim. This is beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Bev.
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Such splendid use of imagery and diction in this one, Kim! ❤️ Especially love; “to pluck a switch or three
of willow, white with soft, sleek buds.” Wow! 😀
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Thanks so much, Sanaa!
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Memory knows how to play with time…(K)
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Waking me slowly. I love “gold with catkins.”
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Thanks Colleen.
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This was wonderful Kim, alive with colors and little buzzing critters. The photo is superb!
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Thank you, Rob!
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The mind-images of those sleepy hummingbird wings have evoked a serious amount of cooing out of me. And smiles, too. Smiles that are all spring. 😀
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Lots of springy smiles! 😁
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I am positively longing for bees, but here I am stuck between two snowfalls (we had one on Monday and are expecting another on Friday). I’ll keep my ears open for their song.
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You still have snow, Rommy?! The closest we’ve come to snow is a heavy frost several weeks ago.
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Out the window, I see rain and snow mixed; March has some twists and barbs still ready to share with us.
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We had some rain yesterday but this morning is sunny and we have snowdrops, daffodils, and buds on the willow! I’m willing some to you across the Atlantic, Glenn!
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I like the description of bees as drowsy and crawling.
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Thanks Frank.
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I love theslow awakening of the season with: bees, still drowsy and crawling
from their winter sleep.
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Thank you, Grace.
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Excellent rendition of the niceties of the coming of spring. We killed two woosely wasps this evening who were wrapped in the wrap I’d taken off our Orange tree earlier this morning (a deterent to the frosting of the budding blossoms). I like that passage from Ecclesiastics, Kim. I also like the song, “Turn, Turn” which quotes Ecclesiastics.
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Thanks Jim! I haven’t spotted any woosely wasps yet – we had a nest in our loft last year.
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Drowsy bees waking up to wing their way through spring… love that image.
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Thank you, Susie. I’m looking forward to some busy bee humming!
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I have such a soft spot for willow catkins.. reminds me of the days of my youth.
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