It’s a ghost in the night,
keeping me awake
with its whispering,
muttering and sighing,
and nudges in my poetic ribs.
It pokes me with imagery
and ties me up in allegory
until I reach for notebook and pen
(which I left on the armchair).
Empty-handed (in inky
midnight darkness) I creep
gingerly downstairs.
It’s a ghost in the early morning,
a wisp of poetry draped across
my aching neck,
a metaphoric albatross
checking rhymes, ensuring
enjambment and caesura make
sense, without a syntactical break.
By the time the sun has risen,
it’s left me to punctuate
the words it deigned to articulate
as it drifts into early sunlight
with grey mist and the remains of night.
Kim M. Russell, 4th April 2019
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif: Writing Poetry, also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night
Susan is hosting this week and I’m a little late linking up, but NaPoWriMo has been keeping me very busy. Plus I’m preparing to visit my daughter to spend some time with my lovely grandson. But I couldn’t miss this prompt, a topic I’ve written about many times and which is always different.
I wish I’d written the words by Robert Frost that Susan has shared together with some from Sanaa, Rajani and Sumana, as well as poems by Joyce Carol Oates, Lydia Huntley Sigourney and Matt Haig.
Our challenge is to write a new poem about writing poetry, limiting ourselves to addressing one poem rather than generalizing.
honestly this is a beautiful poem..that i am wishing i had written it..so many times i have felt this way but just couldn’t express it down..nice work
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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A lovely poem. I chose to write about this poem by not writing about it in an alphabet sestet. The illustration is outstanding.
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Thank you, Toni!
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Writing a poem about another written poem is always a gas; insightful and rife with authenticity–like making a move about making movies (DAY FOR NIGHT, THE STUNT MAN, etc.). I. too, sometimes wake to a poem gestating, churning to become written. It’s a good time to be a poet .
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It’s in the early morning that all sorts of things creep about and there’s bound to be a poem among them. 🙂
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I really love the thought of a poem being born like this…
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Thanks Bjorn!
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The Muse takes many forms and will have its way. Beautifully written, Kim!
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Thank you, Jade!
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🙂 You are very welcome, Kim. I enjoyed your poem very much.
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Beautiful, Kim. I’ve experienced it, but you’ve written about it SO well here!
I hope you have a lovely visit with daughter and grandson.
That illustration is wonderful.
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Thank you so much, Merril!
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This is wonderful!
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Thank you, Leara!
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This is incredibly rich in its use of imagery and language, Kim! ❤️ I love; “it’s left me to punctuate the words it deigned to articulate as it drifts into early sunlight with grey mist and the remains of night.” I have learned with time to pay attention to the muse .. 🙂 usually its the opening line which floats into my mind.. and I allow myself to follow without hesitation. ❤️
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🙂
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Oh I have had many nights like that…I love the words and metaphors. You did this oh so well.
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Thank you, Mary.
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I can so relate to this Kim! “Metaphoric albatross” i love it! A wonderful poem of a poet and their muse at 2 am!
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Thank you, Carrie!
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“a metaphoric albatross” Haha! And yet this poem is so sensual that I feel you LOVE even the gingerly steps and the bird and the skills your old schooling sticks around your words. There is no curse, just a gift. A ghost! Ha! Marvelous.
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Thank you, Susan!
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Ah, I see you know the poem-sprit. I think she visits us all 🙂 Lovely!
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may she visit you every night, Viv. 🙂
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🙏🏾
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When a poem starts coming, it will not be ignored….so often I get up in the night and jot stuff down….or pull over to the side of the road when I’m driving………loved this poem.
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Thank you, Sherry.
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Oh, this is quite delicious Kim! It captures the all-consuming moments of inspiration, and I love the touch of humor. Damn girl, you rocked here…!
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Thanks so much, Rob!
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The poetic spirit lives, haunting us forever. We are doomed. No, we are blessed!
LOVE this, Kim.
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Thank you, Mish!
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Kim, a fun poem. The second stanza is my favorite, especially “nudges in my poetic ribs” Love this phrase.
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Thanks Ali!
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Ah yes that metaphoric albatross! So well put, Kim. You capture that feeling of having a poem on the go, beautifully done.
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Thank you!
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Beautiful poem. I would love my own poetic spirit – maybe I already have one, as yet undiscovered?
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Thank you, Julie – and I’m sure you have. 🙂
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It does feel as if our stories and poetry have a life of their own, and we simply pour them out and punctuate as needed. Beautiful done!
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Thank you, Fatima!
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You are a true poet… the spirits get you up in the middle of the night to write down and inspiration! Well done!
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Thanks Dwight!
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