a fledgling’s first leap
floating on sun-sprinkled wind
morning birdsong
Kim M. Russell, 17th April 2019
My response to Carpe Diem #1649 shining wind (kaze hikaru)
In our exploration of classical and non-classical kigo (seasonwords) for spring, today we have another classical kigo taken from the Shiki Saijiki: ‘shining wind’ (kaze hikaru), which refers to the sparkling of spring sunshine and a gentle wind on a sunny spring day:
kaze hikaru makoto no nata ni hanagoro mo
wind shines
around truth’s flag
and the symphony of flowers as well
Taeko Watanabe. (*1960 -)
I took a haiku from a recent haibun I wrote for a dVerse Poets prompt and reworked it.
Beautiful poem. x
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Thank you, Julie 😊
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Beautiful haiku poem Kim.
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Thanks so much!
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I meant it.
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Awe…such Fabulousness! (@—>—)
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Thanks Dorna!
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