What you doing with that ivy, sister?
Pretending it’s a snake like that one on Instagram.
Didn’t we get wasted last night, man!
Yeah, we had a right scream!
My lips are still black with all the red wine.
My head’s all over the place with ecstasy.
LOL – mine’s so bad I can’t see.
That guy knows how to party.
You mean Dionysus.
But what was the hassle with Orpheus?
My feet feel like they’ve been tied with roots.
It’s just ‘cos you’re still wearing boots.
Did you wake up in the park?
What’s that smell of moss and bark?
Why aren’t we listening to drum and bass?
Instead of blackbird and lark.
What you doing with that ivy, sister?
Kim M. Russell, 21st April 2019
My poem for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Poems in April Day 21: Tree Mythology, also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: On Myths and Legends
I’m hosting this Sunday’s Poem a Day prompt. It’s based on myths, legends and stories in which people change into trees, which was inspired by The Overstory by Richard Powers, an amazing novel of intricately woven roots and branches of tree stories that bring together a group of strangers, each summoned in different ways by trees to save a few remaining acres of virgin forest.
The challenge is to pick a story from tree mythology and write a poem about it.
I love the upbeat pace of this poem, Kim and how you have meshed the present and past mythologies together.. there are cautions in the folklore, even for today!
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Thanks Kerry. It started as a simple re-telling of the story but it didn’t have much oomph,so I decided to bring it up to date. 🙂
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Very nicely done. I didn’t do it “right” so I didn’t share mine.
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Thank you! There is no ‘right’ or ‘wrong’ way – share it, please!
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This is absolutely enthralling! ❤️ I love how you have tied mythology and present day together. There are so many instances that offer us wisdom. We need only pay attention 🙂
PS: Thank you for the amazing prompt! I really enjoyed writing to it ❤️
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Thank you for your kind comments and for taking part in the prompt, Sanaa! ❤
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Live on, Euripides! The rites of Dionysos are the roots of tragedy and comedy, surely the wellspring of our poems. Enlivening the myth here grabs the opium flower and sniffs it whole — the abandonment, the riotous song, the ecstatic trampling of civilization. Great response to the challenge. Ain’t The Overstory incredible? The Pulitzer hardly does it justice.
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Thank you, Brendan! I’ll be over to read and comment when my laptop is back to normal. It’s resting at the moment and I don’t trust my Kindle gremlins not to throw in weird or rude words! I’m on the last couple of pages of The Overstory. It’s an enthralling read, especially for those who l love trees. I’m also reading Circe by Madeline Miller, which is just as entrancing but for different reasons. Btw it has taken me five minutes to write this while battling with gremlins!
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Thank you for this prompt Kim/ You know how I love my trees. A most interesting prompt as well. I went with a Japanese myth about the “wedded pines”.
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Good timing, Toni! my laptop is working normally again so I can read and comment properly without gremlin interference! I’l be over to read shortly. 😉
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I am hearing about this book everywhere. I must read it. Loved your poem, especially the listening to blackbird and lark. Great prompt, Kim.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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That would be unnerving Kim, to go to sleep with boots, wake with roots. It’d put a serious damper on rambling…
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LOL 😀
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Oh… after every Bacchanal there’s a price to pay.. love the way you weave the modern theme into this.. Like teens going clubbing I imagine.
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And they’re texting on their mobile phones even when they’re all in the park turning into trees!
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Look at all the likes on my Insta!
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Fantastic blending of past myth and present day! Loved it Kim.
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Thank you, Linda!
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I love you take on the prompt. We need some upbeat in our dark mythology. 🙂
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Thank you,, Susie. I don’t think we can expel all the darkness from mythology but we can have fun trying! 🙂
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Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant! You’ve absolutely nailed it.
And between you and Brendan, I see I MUST get hold of The Overstory.
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Thanks Rosemary 🙂
I’m on the last few pages of The Overstory and recommend it!
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AH! This is so good — this setup makes the madness even more palpable; I enjoyed this exchange, both upbeat and surreal, so much. The hassle with Orpheus made me chuckle.
I loved this bit: “Did you wake up in the park?/What’s that smell of moss and bark?/Why aren’t we listening to drum and bass?” A song unto itself. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Anmol. I can only imagine the Maenads as teenage girls. 🙂
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This is great. Sounds like one hell of a party. I like the interweaving of the mythic and the modern, and that repeated line pulls it all together.
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Thank you, Sarah. I’m glad you spotted the significance of the repeated line. 🙂
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A fascinating prompt where people turn into trees, love your poem!
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Thank you, Crystal!
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An excellent feel to this, classic tale with modern twists; really shows what can be done with upgrading. The only problem with this prompt for me is that I do not have decent recall on most mythology.
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Thanks Glenn. You could always make up one!
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I really enjoyed the bridges between past and present. Just goes to show you partying has always been the human fashion.. Excellent write.
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Thank you, Violet.
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You make me feel almost sorry for them 🙂
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Me too 😀
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Fun story–and I feel a bit sorry for them, too.
We’re seeing a play soon called “Dionysus Was Such a Nice Man.” I have a feeling it might have a similar tone to your poem.
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Transformations all over the place. I too like the merging of time…humans are always themselves, after all, even when they become trees. (K)
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I wonder what would happen if trees became human – like the ones in Lord of the Rings.
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I’m sure they’d have a few choice words for us!
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I so admire the modern mad hassling twist to the myth Kim. I wonder indeed how all the Gods would behave in today’s scene.
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Thank you, Grace. Maybe the Gods are still there in the background, observing and sometimes playing with human lives as they ever have.
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SMiLes as Every Human
Becomes God Who
is Left
to Worship
Who Made Who
UniVerse Out of Spirals..:)
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Sounds like the chicken and the egg to me!
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All come out
To Play..:)
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