They are our atonement
for the half-eaten cores
tossed from dusty, finger-
smeared train windows,
sprouted into hoards
of apples, sparkling orbs,
railway siding orchards.
They’re a feast for birds,
burnished rosy and russet,
worm-holed and sweetly
rotting to the fading drone
of wasps drunk on the sadness
of sugar. In spring, wind-fresh
blossoms flutter and fall,
white and pink promises
of autumn’s cider-scented flesh.
Kim M. Russell, 3rd March 2020
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Apple!
This week, Anmol (alias HA) welcomes us to dVerse Poetics and he asks us to think about the modest apple, its histories, mythologies and metaphors, and inculcate some of them in our writing.
To inspire us, he has shared a quote from ‘On Eating and Drinking’ by Kahlil Gibran, and three poems, one by Robert Frost, another by Dorianne Laux, and the last one by Cathryn Essinger.
I took some lines from an old poem and re-worked them into a new one.
Nice description of wasps and the sadness of sugar.
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Thanks Frank.
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This is lovely Kim, I especially like the last couplet.
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Thank you, Jane!
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🙂
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I love the story of those apples… the railway siding orchards and their life-ending in the sadness of sugar
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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When hiking, it’s always such a treat to happen upon a deserted orchard or a rogue apple tree. The fruit
tastes wild and forbidden for sure.
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The whole thing is so gorgeous. I especially love this:
“wasps drunk on the sadness
of sugar”
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Thank you so much, Missy!
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I love your story of the railroad orchards. Wild apples for nature itself. How good is that!
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Thanks Dwight! I’m happy about the apple cores, and any other fruit that might take root, but it’s the other stuff that’s dumped by rail and roadside that bothers me. I can’t understand why people do that.
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I agree. The roadsides here get littered as well!
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a delightful description of the impact of apples on so many lives.
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Thank you, Kate.
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Ah! Such lovely couplets, Kim! The imagery is plain beautiful and the way you’ve told a story of those apple cores thrown away is an inspired way of going about it.
I loved this bit a lot: “rotting to the fading drone/of wasps drunk on the sadness//of sugar.”
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Thank you, Anmol. I enjoyed working on this one.
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I like how the apple has an ongoing life, community spread wide. Touched many memories in your wonderfully descriptive work.
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Cheers Paul!
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“white and pink promises of autumn’s cider-scented flesh” … you have such a magic way with words!! Beautiful.
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Thank you, Bev!
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A rich perspective of railway siding orchards, Kim! I especially admire this word picture: “sweetly rotting to the fading drone of wasps drunk on the sadness of sugar.”
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Thank you, Lynn!
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Such exceptionally fine use of imagery from nature, with even a Latin pun as your title.
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Thank you so much, Larry.
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Beautiful portrait of apple trees growing. You make it so magical.
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Thank you!
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“autumn’s cider-scented flesh” has me drooling.
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Thanks Ken.
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