Unlike most of her friends and acquaintances, her teenage years and early twenties were not so much sweet with romance but bitter with break-ups and dour with disappointment. “I don’t know why I was surprised every time love started or ended,” she told her therapist, “I never chose the unlikely men I ended up with, things just happened.” Her first marriage was an utter disaster, she didn’t even like her husband at first, but it resulted in a much-loved child she took solace in when he disappeared over the horizon.
She was in her mid-thirties, accustomed to her own company, treading the familiar road of habit, not looking for romance or even companionship, when love took her by surprise one last time. She didn’t know how to handle his gentleness, kindness and innate generosity, but it swelled in her heart and love quickly grew.
Kim M. Russell, 16th March 2020
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Prosery: Surprised or Not
This Monday Merril is our host for Prosery, when we write a piece of flash fiction no longer than 144 words that is inspired by and includes a line from a poem: “I don’t know why I was surprised every time love started or ended.”
This line comes from Jane Hirshfield’s poem, ‘I wanted to be surprised’.
No blood? No knives? No poison? Kim – you’re way out of step here!
This is lovely, though. I really like the bitter with break-ups, dour with disappointment alliteration, and the happy ending. This feels like a true story.
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Thanks Sarah. It is based on real life.
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This is so sweet… and so good for the child to get a father to love her… I think this happens in so many relationships.
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It does!
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I read a true life romance here!
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You’re right!
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All of what Sarah said–this is lovely, romantic, and well-written. Sigh.
Is that film GIF from “Notorious?” I love that movie.
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Thank you, Merril.
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Like me, you went with a happy ending, and like me, it seems personal ( in my case, it’s a true tale).
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I’m off to bed but will read yours and comment in the morning, Glenn. Mine is based on reality too.
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Very nice. It gives one hope! Thank you.
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Thanks for reading and
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commenting. We all need hope at the moment.
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Such a sweet and tender story!
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Thank you, Linda!
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Oh I lived this story, except for the unexpected true love that finally came. That eluded me. But I did find it with a big black wolf. Smiles.
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🙂
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I like the lubby dubby warm nature of your true story, Kim.
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I love all the dark prose but I needed something hopeful today.
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Ah, love at last, luv that notion
Happy Monday Kim
Much❤love
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Thank you, Gillena. 🙂
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That’s a satisfying ending! (K )
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Thank you, Kerfe!
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a true romantic at heart, delightful happy ending 🙂
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🙂
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Sweet, no murder, a nice change for a minute…just started!
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There’s so much fear at the moment, I felt we needed a happy ending.😊
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Oh yes we do!
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I think often love comes when one least expects it and that can be magical and lasting. Your story is lovely, thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting.😊
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This was so lovely and romantic, Kim. Loved this.
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Thank you so much, Dale.
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kaykuala
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Hank is always for a happy ending despite the trial and tribulations in between
Hank
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Thanks Hank.
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Kim … how to respond. Well, first, LOVE the Cary Grant meme you’ve used here. Those old movies somehow made women feel there was a fairy tale love just waiting for them to discover it. Sometimes, I think women imagine the image in the men they meet….and then after a time, the man doesn’t change, she matures and understands, nope. Not right. Blessed then to find a caring and gentle man….and the one gift that first match left is one of the most precious of all and multiplies itself in our heart with every toddler hug, grade school chuckle, teen age moments of angst, wedding and then a grandchild. Blessings abound. And surely in these days of colossal upheaval, those blessings are ones we cherish even more. I loved this story even more, knowing your happiness at its end….which really isn’t an end, right?
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Thanks so much, Lill, for your lovely in-depth response. I’m relying on the Internet for human contact during the daytime, and I look forward to your chatty comments. I am so lucky. David is taking great care of me; even though he is still working, he has taken over the cooking and shopping while I do the cleaning and laundry. He listens to my worries and fears, and does his best to keep me calm and safe. Love to you and your family. 😊
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A delight, Kim! Happy love found you by suprise! 🙂
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Thanks Frank! 🙂
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