Marked only by a rusted cross of curlicues
among rows of lichen-covered stones,
your final resting place has churchyard hues,
this peaceful housing of your crumbled bones.
I know your name, Alice, when you were born
and the date of your last breath. Not a trace
of family, no husband or child left to mourn.
I wonder who you were, the shape of your face,
how bright your smile, the colour of your eyes.
who you loved and who loved you in return.
But from this rusted cross, I can only surmise,
Alice, that you lived and died alone.
Kim M. Russell, 9th June 2020
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Back to Life
Laura is back to host Poetics this Tuesday, and it seems we have something in common besides writing: churchyards and cemeteries. To get us in the mood, she has shared lines from Elizabeth Bartlett’s ‘Drop me off at the Cemetery’, Leslies Norris’s ‘Elegy for an old Man found Dead on a Hill’, and Longfellow’s ‘In the Churchyard at Cambridge’, as well as making reference to Dylan Thomas’s Under Milk Wood, in which Captain Cat converses with his dead companions.
For this prompt we must rely totally on our imagination to poetically resurrect a deceased person, that must be unknown to us. Laura says we can choose a character from the Norris or Longfellow poem, or one of Captain Cat’s old sea salts. We could find a similar poem that introduces a deceased character and fill in the details; or pick a name from a headstone in any churchyard or cemetery.
I have resurrected and rewritten a poem from 2016, written after a visit to our local churchyard.
wonderful lines: “this peaceful housing of your crumbled bones.”
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Thank you, Laura.
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Love these lines, “this peaceful housing of your crumbled bones.” This makes me wonder about all the unmarked graves and how and if those that have passed are remembered.
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Thank you, Ali. When I found that grave in the local churchyard, with very little information in the inscription, I wondered who had organised her funeral and how many mourners she had, as she seemed to me to be quite alone in death and in life.
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She is not alone anymore. She has your poem now. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Ali.
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I think this is a lovely grave, and I actually think that the beautiful cross was set up by someone very attached to her. I imagine a childless aunt surrounded by nephews when at last she died…
Check out this iron cross from a cemetery in Sweden.
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It is a beautiful cross, and I would like to think that someone chose it for her with great care and love. Perhaps she had a husband or a sweetheart, but he is buried somewhere else, maybe in a foreign cemetery like your Norwegian navvy.
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Ah, poor Alice. You’ve reminded me of a radio programme I heard a few weeks ago, about a woman working for the council to arrange funerals for those who die with no family or friends to do it for them. She was so caring, and worked so hard to try to trace families – it was very moving. Alice’s cross stands out in that graveyard of headstones. You write with great tenderness.
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Thank you, Sarah. There are some wonderful people out their who do the kindest things. I’m so glad she was on the radio – more people need to know about this.
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Kim this is so lovely and your last lines sum up what was likely a sad ending for Alice. I often wonder about peoples lives when I see gravestones like that.
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Thank you so much, Christine. Our village church and graveyard are both small and friendly.
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Oh how I love to wander through old graveyard always think of John Lennon and Eleanor Rigby 🙂
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A beautiful resting place for Alice. Maybe she’s gotten to know her neighbors there?
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I’d like to think so, Lisa.
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I, too, wander cemeteries, snapping photos of the headstones. Your poem sets a perfect tone for the prompt. I favored pioneer cemeteries, and veteran’s graveyards. This was a fascinating prompt to write to.
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this pondering on Alice is a lovely tribute, no doubt someone loved her to give her that cross
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Thank you, Kate. I think someone must have. I’d love to know who.
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one reader said wouldn’t it be great if their relatives heard of our poems and connected to fill in the dots …
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Very nice description of Alice in that last line.
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Thank you, Frank.
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Hi Frank! I tried three times to comment on your poem, but my words just disappeared into the ether. I like the way you hint at what your subject did, Frank, without giving too much away. You left me with questions to be answered.
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I am not sure what I was trying to say.
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What a stunning tribute, written in wonder and speculation.
This is my favorite part:
“your final resting place has churchyard hues”
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Thank you, Shawna.
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Even the cross is empty. Your words have the proper melancholy. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Such aching sadness for Alice.
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Thank you, Sascha.
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kaykuala
But from this rusted cross, I can only surmise,
Alice, that you lived and died alone.
Tell-tale signs that she is a forgotten soul like many that one sees at the graveyard
Hank
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Thank you, Hank. That’s sadly true.
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Well done Kim. Poor Alice must have been a lonely girl!
This is a great description…
Marked only by a rusted cross of curlicues
among rows of lichen-covered stones,
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Thank you, Dwight.
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Ah, sad…
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It is. Everyone else seemed to share a grave and headstone. Alice was all alone.
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One year I adopted all the untended graves for dia de los muertos.. I have a blog on it. Yes, so sad. I have one triple plot I have tended ever since.. I’ve found out who the people are and every year we clear, clean and deocrate. Now that plot matches the others around it.
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And yet someone thought to give her a pretty memorial. Graveyards I must admit, I find desperately miserable places. So many people like Alice who had (possibly) miserable lives and their memorials somehow draw attention to it. Sad.
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I’ve seen only one grave like this in our village churchyard, but it’s a very small village and I’m sure I’d find more elsewhere.
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She must have had someone though. Not everyone got a headstone or a cross. None of my ancestors did.
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among rows of lichen-covered stones,
this peaceful housing of your crumbled bones.
I love these lines. Maybe she was alone in life but not in death.
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Thank you, Debi!
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This has such a peaceful feel to it. Really lovely.
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Thank you, Misky.
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