My
name
crumbles
from my mouth,
a piece of coral.
You might think I’m smiling but it’s rictus –
I’m as terrified of you
as you are of me.
If you could see
into my spine,
you’d find it’s hollow,
encased in an armoury of external teeth –
all the better to eat –
and my eyes are even bigger than my mouth –
all the better to see.
I ride currents and drifts and, because of my plethora of fins,
in spite of my monstrosity,
my ancient body
and my minuscule
fatty brain,
I am an aquatic gymnast.
Watch me stand on my head
and swim on my back!
Then you pull me,
raised from extinction,
from your net.
A piece of coral
crumbles from
my mouth,
my name:
Coelacanth.
Kim M. Russell, 31st August 2020
My response to earthweal weekly challenge: EVOLU-SONGS, also linked to dVerse Poets Pub Open Link Night
Brendan says that he has been thinking about evolution: how life found its way on Earth, the code which governs its flourishing, how life came back after near-eradication after asteroid strikes or runaway climate change. He says that he also thought about the missteps along the way and how we carry humanity’s earlier departures like exist signs along the road which brought us here, and the grand sweep of geologic time and life’s miniscule occupation in it.
For this week’s challenge, we are considering evolution. I’m sharing a poem I wrote in 2017. I’ve submitted it several times to competitions and publications, so I’ve not shared it on the Internet previously.
How terrifying
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But incredible and fascinating.
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yes, it is a very powerful poem
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Thank you, Suzanne.
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How amazing! I love the coral crumbling from its mouth.
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Thank you, Sherry!
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Brilliant! Touching and netting these, though, will surely reverse the Lazarus effect. I love the coral, the hollow spine, the terror. So terse and tight mouthed, I feel I hear it speak.
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Thank you, Susan. I have a specific voice in my head when I think of a this ancient fish.
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Very powerful, Kim. The opening and closing lines, the coral crumbling, are really grabbing. I like the idea of the fish resurrected.
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Thank you, Sarah. I’m fascinated by the story of the coelacanth.
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This is soaked in an abyss of time — radiates it darkly and divinely. What do we know of the living and who’s dead? And what of these ghosts? (I think of the recent story about a singing wild dog that hadn’t been seen in 50 years and was just found again, on the far side of some forgotten island. And to speak its name is to spit coral from one’s mouth — Amen. – Brendan
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So glad you liked it, Brendan. I’m fascinated with the coelacanth. There are so many creatures on this planet that we haven’t seen or heard of. And then there’s the Loch Ness monster.
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This is incredibly potent, Kim! ❤️ I love the image of; “coral crumbling from its mouth.” 🙂
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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“My
name
crumbles
from my mouth,
a piece of coral.”
What an introduction to this fantastic fish – once thought extinct
[years ago there was a board game called ‘Zoo quest’ associated with David Attenborough and Coelacanth was the highest scoring animal!]
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I believe it was a David Attenborough programme that first brought the Coelacanth to my attention, Laura. The ocean is so vast, there have to be more creatures down there that we know nothing about or believed to be extinct. And then there’s Nessie…
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Hans and Lottie Hass showed me the wonders of the deep!
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What about Jacques Cousteau?
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Ah yes – all surfacing now with the Coelacanth
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Interesting. You bring us right into their world.
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Thank you, Ken.
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I still remember the stories I read about this remarkable find… this creature, remains of the past, the link to ourselves still living. (a while)
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I find them fascinating.
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Wow, the imageries present here in this piece are unique! It intrigues me greatly, especially this:
“If you could see
into my spine,
you’d find it’s hollow,
encased in an armoury of external teeth –
all the better to eat –”
And I was really expecting this to end like: “to eat you with” especially with the Coelacanths looking absolutely terrifying. Hahaha. You capture them well in this poem with very vivid details. Wonderful poem, yet again.
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Thank you so much, Lucy! He is terrifying to look at but I think, after all the years of being on this planet, he’s just happy to be noticed and wouldn’t pose any threat.
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I enjoyed learning about this creature Kim. He is an interesting find!
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I find him fascinating, and I’m sure there are more forgotten creatures out there.
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A quite remarkable poem about a creature I was unaware of. Thanks for sharing with us .
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Thank you, Glenn.
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Kim, can this be considered a shape poem? Looking at it sideways, it looks like Lazarus. It’s a fascinating being. Happy some are still alive. The lake sturgeons evoke that same fascination for me. Wonderful poem honoring a sea-dwelling mystery.
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Thank you! I did aim for a shape poem, Lisa, and I’m so glad you noticed! There are so many living things on this planet that we don’t know about and so many fossils of creatures that once existed that we will never know all of them. That’s one of the reasons I enjoy David Attenborough’s work.
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You’re welcome, Kim. As a kid I used to *love* watching Jacques Cousteau as he shared so much of the underwater kingdom with the viewers. I’ve seen some of David Attenborough’s shows. Nature is always full of wonder.
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It’s clear that these ancient creatures trigger some very fine poetic output for you, KR. Well done & thanks for the video. Have a great weekend!
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Thank you, Ron. I hope this weekend is good to you.
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Enjoyed this!
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Thank you, Mary.
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I haven’t heard of this creature but, you made me feel and see it through your words.
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I’m glad you were able to see it, Truedessa. I find these kind of creatures fascinating.
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This poem is full of vivid imagery straight out of the primordial soup: it makes me hope we won’t be the next ones facing extinction; and if we are, will we be pulled from the brink like the coelacanth?
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It blew my mind just to think how long the coelacanth has been on this planet – our time is only a fraction and we’ve already done so much damage. It’s up to Mother Nature whether she will pull us from the brink.
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Yes, I think it’s out of our hands now, if it was ever in them…
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Incredible. I enjoyed learning about him. Well done, Kim.
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Thank you, Ayala.
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So much to think about here. I love the crumbling coral in its mouth. I think the sight of him would be both terrifying and amazing.
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Thank you, Merril.
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You’re welcome!
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This is great, Kim. You had me right at the title, Lazarus, he who returned from the dead. And your description of the coelacanth is so packed with imagery and meaning. The eyes, better to see, and mouth, etc. make us think of the frightening fairy tale monster, but also of the process of evolving this fish went through. So well done!
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Thank you so much, Mary!
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This is brilliant. Kim, a powerful and imaginative piece…well done! JIM
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Thank you, Jim!
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And we thought it extinct! Interesting how the coelacanth hasn’t changed much. Love the title and suspense of your poem, Kim.
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Thanks Lynn!
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