Monday is the colour of sky,
the first day of the week
as fresh as washing on a line.
This November Monday,
there’s a musty yellow scent,
an ochre aroma of decay,
like a pumpkin or a melon,
overripe and mushy mellow,
not citrus-sharp like lemons.
This Monday’s weather
is washed into a muddy green,
sun and wind and rain together,
mixed up like the paint pots
that we used to have at school,
or the aprons with their ties in knots.
This Monday afternoon,
scribbled out with charcoal grey,
is disappearing all too soon
and darkness will be replaced
with bright electric lights
and orange heat to warm my face.
Kim M. Russell, 3rd November 2020
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Meeting the Bar: Synesthesia, also linked to Poets and Storytellers United Writers’ Pantry #46
Grace is hosting this Thursday with an episode of the Synesthesia series. She asks if we can imagine words and numbers as colours and textures, which is one of the things experienced by people with synesthesia, the neurological phenomenon in which stimulation of one sense leads to automatic, involuntary experiences of another sense. She says that there are over eighty types of synesthesia, and nearly every combination of sensory experiences or cognitive concepts is possible, such as seeing music or numbers as colours, perceiving letters as personalities, hearing colours and touching smells.
Grace has provided a link to a talk by Richard E. Cytowic on the subject, as well as a poem by Philip Good and Bernadette Mayer entitled ‘Alternating lunes’.
Today’s challenge is to write about a colour from the perspective of a synesthete.
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And we wrote about Monday, smiles. I love that Monday’s weather – muddy green,
sun and wind and rain together. I can’t wait to change that charcoal grey to bright electric lights and orange heat. Take care Kim!
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Thank you, Grace!
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Good concept to show that every day, although the same, is different. I’m sure that M-F 8-5 workers would have more similar Mondays — dreary and grey. I like the connections between colors, textures, and scents in your poem.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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I love those muddied paints, and the grey scribbles on the afternoon. Lovely use of colour, Kim.
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Thank you, Sarah.
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I especially love how you describe the color of Monday as that shade of colors that we made trying to blend watercolors… somehow I usually ended up with something closer to brown.. (like a Monday)… also love how you described the scents.
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Yes, mixing colours was something we all did, and, depending on the ratio, we all seem to have got something along the range of brown to murky green. As I said to Ingrid, that stanza reminded me of the smell of the powder paints we used at school.
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That murky green is exactly the colour of dismal November mornings. I call it fish tank green.
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Great description, fish tank green!
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Not the cheeriest of colours.
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How inventive! Monday was a always wash day – sometimes a wash out and you have taken it and added all sorts of colour
” washed into a muddy green,
sun and wind and rain together,”
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Thanks you, Laura!
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I think you’ve captured the different feel of the days very well, they all seem different to us as individuals. Nicely done. November Mondays are particularly difficult for me, especially a dreary one many weeks from Christmas. I love your take on the prompt.
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Thanks for the close reading and thoughtful comment, Francis.
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You’re welcome, thank you 🙏🏻
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I love the colors you chose for Monday and how the day can be different. Nothing is ever the same. Well written!
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Thanks Lucy. When I was still working, I used to dread Mondays. Now I look forward to them.
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You’ve mixed many colours into your Monday palette here – so much more than the dull grey I normally associate with that day! I especially love:
mixed up like the paint pots
that we used to have at school,
or the aprons with their ties in knots.
Takes me back to my school days 🙂
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Cheers Ingrid. Mondays are very different since I retired, I quite like the feeling of a fresh new day at the beginning of the week. As I wrote about the paint pots, the smell of powdered paints mixed with water rose up in my memory.
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The fifth and sixth stanzas of piece took me right back to kindergarte. I hadn’t felt those feelings in years. You nailed he prompt for sure. Nicely done!
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Thank you so much!
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This was wonderful to read.
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Thank you, Rob!
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Enjoy that orange heat, KR. Nothing beats cedar smoke, IMHO.
Loved your synesthesia.
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Thanks Ron. Music affects me in a similar way.
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A stunning palette of words!
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Thanks so much, Eugenia!
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This is incredibly stunning, Kim! 💝 You describe the moodiness of Monday weather with such expert precision. Especially love; “This Monday’s weather is washed into a muddy green, sun and wind and rain together.” Yes! 🙂
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Thank you, Sanaa! :0
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I love “scribbled out with grey” — Wonderfully drawn imagery,
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Thank you, Dora.
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A vivid word painting. (K)
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I’m just fascinated by this poem.
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Yup, luv this Kim
Much💙love
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Thanks Gillena, and much love to you.😊
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Coming back late, I feel like I’m in a long line to vote. You’ve given us poetics with perfect pitch. I especially liked the olfactory clues, which tap my memories the strongest.
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Thanks Glenn!
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I liked your musty Monday of rotten garden veggies! Well done.
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Thank you, Dwight.
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This definitely engages the senses! I liked the “ochre aroma of decay.” Great storytelling!
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Thanks so much, Tricia!
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I love all the colors of Monday.
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Thank you, Mary.
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‘an ochre aroma of decay’ and ” muddy green” wonderful expressions of November Rainy Mondays.
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Thank you, Debi.
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SO late to the reading…apologies, Kim. I LOVE this. I especially liked this line
“as fresh as washing on a line.” because many years ago, when we were raising our children and living in Iowa, I had a clothes line in our back year and especially loved hanging out our sheets. This line hit home.
I also really enjoyed the image of the paint pots….it made me smile. Somehow when children are young, so many of them keep mixing their paints up until they just have a brown…and oh yes…the paint pots with the dripping paint…and the smudges and the weather juxtaposed to it. I REALLY enjoyed this write!
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Thanks much, Lill. As you know, I have a rotary dryer in the garden, and an airing rack in the utility room for bad weather days. I must get my paint pots out again soon.
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So many delicious images – it is hard to choose a favourite
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Thank you for your kind comment, Jae.
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How well you describe the oncoming winter weather. It always feels strange being down under in Australia where the weather and temperatures are opposite to yours.
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Thank you, Robin. Yes, it is very strange. Does water really go down the plughole in the other direction?
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Oh! I really like this poem. I like how you mixed the colors, the textures, how you involve the senses with tangible memories for the reader to connect. Really well crafted!
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Thank you so much for your comments, Adriana!
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You’ve created a watercolor image with your words. I can picture each moody moment of the November sky so vividly.
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Thank you, Rommy!
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I love the idea of thinking of a day or season as a color. What a fun word painting you have made.
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Your poetry makes Monday look so versatile and exciting. I love the idea of Monday smelling like clean laundry. It just fits. I also like that it isn’t the only kind of Monday. That, like with many things in life, Monday can be all sorts of things.
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I used to like the Boomtown Rats’ song ‘I don’t like Mondays ‘ but I can’t agree with it anymore.😊
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You beautifully depict a bleak November Monday. We’re “enjoying” just such a day today. We all need sunshine to get through these November days!
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Thank you, Bev.
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A brilliant rendering ~ I was not familiar with the phenomenon of synesthesia. And now I am ~~~
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Thanks Helen!
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So enjoyable to read! I well know those water cups after rinsing brushes! And Mondays? That was my mother’s wash day, and she did hang some things on the line to dry! I am not sure I miss the organization of Monday is wash, Tuesday is iron… etc. or not. Of course, I don’t even own an iron! Today would have been sheet changing day to my mother.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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This is beautiful writing …. the words – as lyrical as notes – exquisitely woven together – into a really stellar piece. Clearly, synesthesia takes poetry in magical directions.
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Thank you very much, Wendy.
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I like your array of colours! What fascinates me is that we synesthetes don’t all see the same things the same colour! Or personality or whatever. (I have this gift in a sort of background way. If you asked me, I could tell you what colours particular letters are for me, or what personality a particular word has – I get an image – but it’s not in the forefront of my mind as I go about my days.)
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Thank you, Rosemary. I get it with music and sometimes with scents.
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