No time to think about a bag for life,
I leave recycling the rubbish to the wife.
Cigarette butts and packets fly out of the car,
no time to wash my hands with a beer on the bar.
At work, it’s the same if I can’t find a bin,
there are cleaners to tidy the areas I work in.
I eat meat because I like it, that’s what it’s there for,
leather boots and jacket show what I stand for,
and a gun’s not a weapon, it’s a necessity
to protect my belongings and my family,
or for fun with my friends when we’re out on a hunt,
if you think otherwise, you’re a snowflake or a …
Kim M. Russell, 9th November 2020
My response to earthweal weekly challenge: Fiction? Don’t be a stranger!
Jim (stopdraggingthepanda.com) is hosting this week with an interesting, somewhat tricky, and challenging prompt, which was inspired by Vancouver’s Writers Festival. He says that this year it was an online event, mostly on Zoom, and what stood out for him was a panel discussion about the climate crisis/ emergency with Seth Klein, author of A Good War, which looks at how governments respond in war time and postulates that the same kind of action is required to combat climate change (all governments at the moment are essentially climate change deniers because the actions they are taking are insufficient); Sheena Lambert, whose book Petra is a fictionalized account of the life of Germany’s first Green Party leader and looks at the role of activism in taking on climate change; and Amin Maalouf, whose book Adrift examines how we got to where we are today, the decline of postwar socialism and the rise of capitalism.
Jim comments that poets tend to write from the view point of the poet, from a personal view point; they may create alter egos, but they rarely create fictional characters, which is why our challenge is to write a poem from the point of view of someone who is a climate change denier or a climate solution denier or someone who just doesn’t care because they won’t be around when it happens. We can choose any form or go with free verse. We should try to create fictional characters, which Jim says is more fun and liberating, as the key is to provide some insight into what makes the characters tick, how they arrived at that point of view, and consider their motivation. We can make them sympathetic or not and use satire if we want.
Love this, Kim – such a different voice for you. The ending made me smile, sort of. Far too many people like this in the world.
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Thanks! The topic touched a nerve with me, Sarah.
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hahaha!
good work, kim!
🙂
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Thank you, Nick!
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You aced this challenge, Kim! What an odious character you created! Unfortunately as Sarah said there are too many of these people out there…
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Thanks Ingrid! I only know about these people because my husband has to work with some of them. Thankfully, I haven’t met too many.
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Many of them seem like a balloon that could pop at any minute–its all a surface inflation of cliches for show. I wonder if they didn’t feel they had to impress other men, what might they really say and think? (K)
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Interesting question, Kerfe, but I’m not sure I want to find out.
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I know men like this, some of whom I like, and I’ve seen how they subtly change to match different environments. And I always sense a deep insecurity in their bravado. That does not excuse their behavior, but it makes me think we need to find a way to make it unnecessary.
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It would take time, but it’s possible. Like most men, individually the y are more malleable, it’s when they’re together they become more Neanderthal.
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Group dynamics do amplify things.
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Great stuff, Kim and you are the first responder! This is what I was looking for, and no holds barred, that last line is brilliant! JIM
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Thank you, Jim! I’m glad mine fits the bill.
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Great ending, Kim, to a great poem!
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Cheers, Kim!
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Your poem depicts a growing, and quite terrifying, point of view. The fact these people are armed is what makes the situation so dangerous.
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Your poem depicts a growing, and quite terrifying, point of view. The fact these people are armed is what makes the situation so dangerous.
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I have only ever seen an air rifle and that scared the pants off me. I don’t like weapons of any kind.
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Me neither. I’m glad we have strict gun laws here.
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Oh yes, you got the voice just right. I am having trouble writing in this voice, still trying……
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It wasn’t easy.
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Our opposite is surely unreflective as this boor. Maybe it’s the fog of testosterone, it makes one … handsy with denial. Arch and rich flow here, great couplets rhyming toward the unsayable. Well done!
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Your comments are always appreciated, Brendan; you read below the surface and focus on the craft.
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You have an ironic sense of humour.
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Loved it 👏
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Thank you!
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Beautiful!
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Thanks!
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