It strolled through the back door one sunny morning, a small, grey wisp of a cat like a cloud, and stayed. Kay had heard it mewing and thought it was her own cat, Muffin, so she opened a pouch of his favourite fish in jelly, forked it into a clean bowl, and placed it on the plastic mat next to the water and dry food. When she opened the door, the little grey streak of mist strutted past her towards the bowl and stuck its head in. It seemed to inhale the meatiness – and then it drifted into the rest of the house, leaving the food intact. Muffin didn’t seem to mind. He gobbled up the cat food and played with the ghost like he did with the shadows on the wall.
She remembered the day when she first moved in, how her neighbour had invited her round for tea. There was a wrinkled, white-haired old woman in a long skirt and shawl, knitting in a chair in a corner of the living room. She tentatively approached the woman, raising her voice a little.
“Hello. I’m Kay. How are you?”
The woman smiled faintly but said nothing.
“Just ignore my resident ghost,” Edith, the neighbour, said. “Not everyone can see her. We got used to her over the years.”
Kay felt a shiver of unease crawl over her body, leaving the hairs standing up on her forearms for a few seconds, and then she smiled back at the ghost in the corner, who nodded at her and went back to her knitting.
Kay wondered if the cat came from next door. She’d been there a month when it first appeared and she quite liked the faint indentations it made in the couch and on the bed, and she slept on the edge of the mattress to leave plenty of room for two cats instead of one when she retired for the night.
For Poets and Storytellers United Writers’ Pantry #53: The Bicentenary of Anne Brontë’s Birth
I originally wrote this as a full-length story for a competition.
I loved the twists and turns of this piece not knowing quite whre it was going. The cats were fun and even the resident ghost (clearly benign) drew me in thinking I wopuldn’t mind being part of this group!
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Thank you, Robin. There’s more to come!
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Ethereal and AWESOME, KR.
Write on!
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Cheers Ron! More to come next week.
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Looking forward to the next installment 😀
-David
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Thank David!😊
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Spooky. The cat could be the lady ghost’s pet?
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You’ll find out in the next instalment.😊
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I’m looking forward to the reast of the story!
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Several instalments to follow.😊
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Love the ‘indentations’ and sleeping on ‘the side of the bed.’ Cheers.
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Your treatment of ghosts in storytelling are such wonderful examples of magical realism. In this story, just like you did in Joe and Nelly–ghosts (or the concept of ghosts) enter the story so seamlessly that we don’t have to work to believe in them. I love that. And I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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Thank you so much, Magaly. I hope my story lives up to expectations.
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They always do. 🙂
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Nothing like a good ghost story …. providing they’re good ghosts, of course. Can’t wait to learn more about this one.
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Thanks Bev. More to come next weekend!
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Well this is fun!
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🙂
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Oh, how gorgeous! So beautifully told. I have had cat ghosts visit – but they are of cat companions who have lived with me, not strangers.
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I think my real cats play with my ghost cats.
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Lve this, Kim. Reminds me of Grayson, my darling cat that died (dogs killed her) three years this March. She was very much a ghost cat. I miss her so much.
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Thank you, Jane. I hope you enjoy the rest of the episodes.
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I[m sure I will….i love your writing. xox, Jane
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😊 xox
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Excellent writing Kim. Interesting story, and for me, a wonderfully different insight into your writing. Engages one to think about the veil between realms. I am pleased to join in at P&SU in this new year. Hope it’s a good one for all
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Thank you, Rob. I’m glad you’ve joined us at P&SU. Plenty more episodes to come!
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