Trees
whisper wintry secrets
in the bare bones of their topiary,
rubbing limbs
with knurly suppleness,
embracing silhouettes in their lacy canopy,
growing side by side, content
in their long marriage of species,
a symphony
of bark
and knots,
of sap
and long-awaited buds.
Kim M. Russell, 8th February 2021
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Quadrille Quadrille: Let’s Embrace
Merril reminds us that next Sunday is Valentine’s Day. I don’t bother with Valentine’s Day, but I agree with her – I would never say no to good dark chocolate. However, February is a sad month for me as my mother’s funeral was on this day four years ago, which is why I am grateful for the embrace of this Monday’s quadrille.
I love the examples Merril has given, from poems by Walt Whitman and Mary Oliver.
Free image of inosculation (married trees) found on Dreamstime.
What a wonderful shape of the poem… it really adds a lot to the wonderful image of the trees embracing, while waiting for spring.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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Married trees! 😍👏 Oh how beautiful is that! This is exquisitely rendered, Kim. I love the shape of your quadrille swirling like leaves on the screen. This is particularly lovely; “a symphony of bark and knots,of sap and long-awaited buds.” 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa, for your appreciation and kind words. 🙂
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Beautiful and such imagery in your words and the photos.
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Thank you!
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I’m so sorry about the sad memories on this date, and for your loss.
You’ve given us a wonderful poem of trees embracing. I always love seeing how trees reach towards one another. I am so impressed that you also managed to get such a good poem into a tree shape!
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Thank you, Merril. January and February are tricky months, with death, wedding and funeral anniversaries all on the calendar. I love writing about trees and writing this poem gave me a bit of a lift.
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I’m so glad that it did. Hugs!
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This is a good one, Kim! The images are perfect, that last sturdy trunk-like phrase, and the ‘knurly suppleness’.
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Thank you, Jane!
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Lovely tree-poem, Kim, and a lovely shape to it too! I was trying to achieve a heart-shape with mine, but in the end I gave up.
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Thank you, Ingrid. I don;’t think I’ve tried a heart shape. I’ll be over to read soon.
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How in the world on the joined trees. Many blessings to them. I love the tree shape it has great character just as your descriptive poem does. Sorry to hear this is a sad anniversary for you, Kim. {{{HUGS}}}
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Thank you, Lisa, for kinds words and hugs.
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YW ❤
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I am so sorry for your loss, Kim. My heart goes out to you, my friend. ❤ ❤
This is such a beautiful, in-depth poem communicating the aspects of nature everlasting its love. It can even be about the comparison on how true love grows together especially in different times. I also can see how it delineates that the buds of peace may arrive soon. Of course, my interpretations are subjective. 🙂 But I love how I can see so many different meanings flow through this piece like the wind. There's a certain solemnity, yet peace as I read this poem. It's brilliant in your brilliant Kim poetic style. It's absolutely wonderful and the shape just captures your eye! Clever.
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Thank you, Lucy. I’m off to bed soon – got up far too early, but I’;; be back to read and comment again in the morning.
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“Content in their long marriage of species”- sigh- this is beautiful.
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Thank you, Linda.
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What wonderful new words, Inosculation & topiary–fodder for future poetics. The shape of your poem is fantastic. It takes a moment, while reading, to grasp the significance.
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Thanks Glenn. Inosculation was a new word to me, but I came across on on my search for images of ‘marriage trees’ – it’s the correct term. I love new words!
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Beautiful poem, Kim, and I really like the shape of the poem as well.
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Thank you, Francina.
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Beautiful promise of buds and birds and promise of Spring, presented in a clever tree-shaped topiary format. Thoughtful and well penned, Kim.
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Thank you, Bev.
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Very shapely work indeed, KR; and captures the woodsiness well. Salute.
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Thanks Ron. Wood is good.
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sorry for your loss but the embracing growth of trees and buds give life hope … you found the perfect pic to fit with your awesome poem!
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Thank you, Kate.
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A lovely shape poem
Happy Monday
Much💗love
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Thank you, Gillena. Have a great week!
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What could be more delightful than a poem in the shape of a tree? NOTHING, not one thing.
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Thank you so much, Helen!
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I love this! Beautiful words woven in the shape of a tree. Amazing piece!
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Thank you for your kind words, Eugenia!
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My pleasure, Kim!
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I love the picture of the trees doing a fist bump!! Great poem Kim. Love what you did with the tree formation!
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Thank you, Dwight. It’s not just trees of the same species that grow together, it’s different species too. Trees send their wisdom to humans – I wish they’d listen.
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Yes, we can learn a lot from them!
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I love the way your words are spread out like a tree. Your poem so beautifully describes the tree in the photo you shared. Wonderful Kim ☺️
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This is exactly what I was thinking – it’s amazing! Well done, Kim!
-David
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Thanks so much, David!
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Thank you so much, Christine. 🙂
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Great mingling of words and image. (K)
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Thanks Kerfe!
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I really like how form and expression work together, you have created such a visual, felt, and evocative poem.
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Thank you, Paul.
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Most welcome Kim.
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So beautiful! The form is dazzling to the eyes and the words captivate the mind. I love the idea of trees having a long marriage to one another, rubbing limbs and embracing silhouettes!
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Thank you, Tricia!
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This is a vivid poem, even without the image or the shape of the poem.
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Thank you, Ken.
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Love this shape poem….and by separating your words, you’ve illustrated that flirting with the sun that leaves so often do. Your description is so good here, Kim.
Apologies for late reading…..I was glued to our television Tuesday noon until Saturday afternoon: watched every single minute of the impeachment trial. I’m an old debater from high school and university days…so really was enthralled with the process. An amazing case of methodically presented evidence. Sometimes I found myself yelling at the tv! Not happy with the verdict….but there were 7 brave Republicans and most importantly, all is now in the record for history.
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