Without a brush,
how could a painter flesh
out spectral fingers of left-over snow,
dab them with early sun’s glow,
or stroke lines of slender hazel trees
ablaze with catkins, golden with bees?
And yet, there they are, scraped
as if they had escaped
from canvas, pressed
and dragged, distressed
and burning
capturing
every summer, autumn, winter, spring,
all life erupting.
Kim M. Russell, 23rd March 2021
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Poetics: The Poet as Painter
Laura is back for Poetics this Tuesday, with an ekphrastic prompt. She says that ‘when our Muse has withdrawn the helping hand and is seemingly reclining somewhere in the Greek Isles, we turn to others for inspiration… Quite often it is the visual – a photo, or any illustration or art work. Thus the ekphrastic poem is born’.
She gives us a definition from Merriam Webster and the stunning examples from X. J. Kennedy’s ‘Nude Descending a Staircase’, Sylvia Plath’s ‘The Disquieting Muses’, and Anne Sexton’s emotive vision of ‘A starry night’.
Laura says that what struck her about these poems is ‘how the poets managed to liberate themselves from the paintings’ visual reality so that instead of mere description, depiction and duplication, they engage, and interpret, and thus the paintings become their own works of art.’
For this Poetics prompt, she doesn’t want us to begin with the visuals but with some titles of modern and contemporary abstract art she has given, one of which is ‘Broadway Boogie Woogie’ by Piet Mondrian, the focus of one of my past Haibun prompts, Meet Piet from 25th May 2020, which is why I have chosen ‘A Painter Without a Brush’ by Gerhard Richter My first stanza is painterly and the second ekphrastic.
Love what you have done here Kim – the landscape as painting before the brushwork and then to add the ekphrastic 2nd verse as contrast. Brilliant!
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Thanks so much, Laura!
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Oooh we chose the same title! 💝 This is exquisitely drawn, Kim 😀 I adore the culmination; “burning
capturing every summer, autumn, winter, spring, all life erupting.” Yes! Your poem is a painting within itself 💝
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Thank you, Sanaa! 🙂
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You’re most welcome! 🥰
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Wow, guess this title is going to be a popular one. Love how the canvas jumped from left over snow to all of life erupting. The energy moves with dazzling lines: escaped from canvas to
burning
capturing
every summer, autumn, winter, spring
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Thank you, Grace.
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I most adore the first stanza. For me, you managed to capture the essence of those final magical touches a painter puts to his work….that shadow, that glow….I’ve always found that most fascinating. Many of us can paint a flat picture….but those little dabs, strokes, smudges of color make the apple, just on the side to the open window, glow…..leave the snow in just one place, crossed by the shadow of the tree that stands in the right of the painting because of the angle of the sun which somehow is etched almost imperceptibly in the corner of the sky. I enjoyed this post very much!
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Your comment has made my morning, Lill!
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Kim I like how you flipped the script here, where usually we think of an artist capturing an image on a canvas, but here, they have escaped the canvas.
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Thanks Lisa. That’s how my poems sometimes arrive, clawing their way out of the page or the laptop screen!
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You’re very welcome.
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I love how you capture the painting as you want it to be, before finally forming it without that brush and I can feel how the landscape comes to life under your hand. Maybe painting without a brush is sculpting with paint.
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Thank you, Bjorn. I wanted to include an image of the painting but the artist is still alive and I didn’t want to breach any copyright. So I linked the Joni song instead because of the line ‘I am a lonely painter, I live in a box of paints’.
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Loved this line: “scraped as if they had escaped from canvas” and its sudden about face with the headlong rush into “all life erupting.” Beautifully crafted.
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Thank you so much, Dora!
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This is so imaginative! Found you through this dVerse challenge and thought what a small world as I live in Norwich!
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Thank you so much! I’m delighted you’ve joined us, Emine. You missed last weeks live Open Link Night, but there will be another one next month, I haven’t read your poem yet. but will be over later. It is indeed a small world. I live in Dilham.
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Yes will have to join the next one that sounds fun. ☺️
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such exquisite details here – “or stroke lines of slender hazel trees ablaze with catkins, golden with bees?”
Your imagery pops and I would hang it on the wall! 💯💝💝
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What a lovely comment, Tricia, thank you!
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I think I totally failed at this prompt, Kim; but YOU freakin NAIKED it. I thin I need some time off…
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Thanks Ron! I haven’t read yours yet – I will later this morning – but I’d miss your poems if you took time off.
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“NAILED”, that is…
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🙂
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Oh so clever Kim – two prompts in one! I loved this line “or stroke lines of slender hazel trees
ablaze with catkins, golden with bees?” Your words painted a beautiful picture ☺️💕
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Thank you so much, Christine! 😉
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How glorious, your interpretation of his abstract art!!!!
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Thank you, Helen!
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This is so perfect Kim! Just beautiful, I don’t know what else to say. I’m lost for words!
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Thank you, Ingrid, no need for words. 🙂
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like how you responded both ways in the one magic poem … and Joni adds voice!
these lines are exquisite …
“as if they had escaped
from canvas, pressed
and dragged, distressed
and burning”
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Thanks Kate!
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exactly
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Well done! I like the questions you pose and the paradox shown as the painting appears to be quite distressed!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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This is rich and full of depth and tension.. A most beautiful colorful write Kim. I’ve been sidelined by my flaring arthritic fingers, so I am late reading everyone’s work.
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Thank you, Rob. I hope the arthritis lets your fingers go very soon and you can treat us to one of your poems.
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Powerful imagery, especially the second stanza, but the first was just breathtakingly vivid. Loved it.
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Thank you so much, Dora!
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