The machine rumbles,
bubbles with the scent
of her favourite detergent,
lending lightness to the drudgery,
the air soap-shimmery
in a slant of spring sun.
He sits on the opposite
bench in the launderette
watching his washing tumble
in the drier with a syncopated
rhythm, the clunk and click
of buttons and zips.
The drier stops.
She smiles, hands
him a basket,
into which he drops
each item. All the while
their eyes smile.
She watches him cram
everything in a bag,
unpacks and folds
his shirts and sweaters,
so much better
than he can.
Her machine still rumbles,
bubbles with the scent
of her favourite detergent,
overplayed by warm sun,
the smell of his clean washing,
and the fact that he’s waiting.
Kim M. Russell, 30th April 2021
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Tuesday Poetics: Put your Words on Spin Cycle
De is back with a quote from Richard Wilbur and a prompt to put our words into a different spin: we are writing laundry poems. De gives us options, links where we can find some further poetical laundry inspiration, a poem by Ruth Stone and one of her own. I’ve chosen to write about a tryst that starts at a launderette.
Image by Kid Circus on Unsplash
We don’t laundromats in Sweden, so this feels a bit like a movie to me. To meet someone at such a place, but I guess it’s a natural place since you have to spend so much time there and also an intimacy that you probably wouldn’t find elsewhere.
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I thought they were everywhere. Does everyone have washing machines in Sweden, then? I used to enjoy meeting up with people at the local launderette in Cologne.
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Either you have your own washingmachine or there is a shared one in the basement of your house (its cost is part of the rent)
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This is exquisitely drawn, Kim! 😀 I love the image of “the air soap-shimmery in a slant of spring sun.” There is a certain romance in doing laundry together. *wink* 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa! 🙂
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You’re most welcome! x
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A meet-cute, indeed, Kim! I love this sudsy beginning.
This is the sound of the laundromat, for me, always:
“the clunk and click
of buttons and zips.”
So perfectly put.
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Thank you, De!
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I like the coziness of the scene. I never minded going to the laundromat back in the day. There is a lulling with the rhythmic sound of the dryers tumbling and humming.
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When I was little my mum used to send me with a big bag of washing. Later, when I lived in Germany, I would go to the launderette regularly and got to know many of the other people there. We’d go to the cafe next door for coffee.
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What pleasant memories for you. Doing laundry with people you know is comfy and perfect to go next door to a cafe while it’s going through its cycles.
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Aw, so romantic. I haven’t been in a laundrette for a long time! This is sweetly done.
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Our nearest launderette is about five miles or so from here. I’ve only had to use it a few times when out machine broke down.
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This is so sweet, Kim: I can just imagine this scene. It’s definitely early days in a relationship when you enjoy folding the laundry though…
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Thank you, Ingrid. I’ve known a few people who met in launderettes back in the seventies and eighties.
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That title is so clever!!! Excellent pacing, control, and rhythm throughout.
This is my very favorite part: “She smiles, hands”
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Love in the laundromat! A tender write, Kim.
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Thanks Bev!
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Ahhh.. Meet me at the laundro… Nicely captured moment, Kr.
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Thanks Ron!
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Been a long time since I have been to one. Love the his and her washing part, specially the sounds, and that slight emotional wistful and hopeful connection. Am smiling at this meet-cute moment.
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Thank you, Grace!
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Lovely descriptions building up a very warm, cosy, sweet smelling atmosphere for romance
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Thank you!
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A laundromat made for love! Perfect Kim.
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Thank you, Linda!
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A sweet love story Kim. I especially liked how she wanted to fold his laundryI We know we can do it so much better ☺️
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Thank you, Christine. I have know several couples who met in the launderette.
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the smell of his clean washing,
and the fact that he’s waiting.
He’s well taken care of. How nice to be on the same wavelength, Kim! A great close!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank!
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Thanks Hank!
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This is sexy, Kim!
❤
David
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Thanks David!
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Love this – feels like the beginning of a rom-com almost. And very clever with the title!
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Thank you so much!
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Ahh, you’ve captured much of what I remember about laundromats (except I never had or found any romance in one).
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I love the way this topic has brought out both how personal and how universal the concept of laundry is. Everyone knows this scene, and you evoke it beautifully, while still making it yours alone.
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Thank you, Xan!
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This is so sweet, and I love all the sounds (and scents). I hope all goes well for them!
(Personally, I’ve always found laundromats kind of creepy. )
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Thank you, Merril. Some launderettes are, especially some I used in London. The closest one to us is near a cafe and the river, so you can watch boats and swans. I only went once when our machine broke down.
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Cafe and watching swans sounds delightful! 😀
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This feels like a scene from a romantic movie. I would like to know what happens next.
As Björn already said we don’t really have them. Instead we have washrooms shared with our neighbors (if we don’t have our own machine) which have lead to whole books of washroom notes. Where people bicker over anything and everything. 😀
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I like the idea of a film that starts in a launderette, Helen, but in some ways I’m reminded of an old advert for Levi jeans!
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Advertisers always uses the most appealing images. After working for years as a salesperson I know too well how much that industry uses all the cutting edge knowledge in psychology in ways that over the years seemed more and more “evil” to me.
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