You did not go gentle through your life,
knocked hard for flesh to let you enter,
soul-shaken by your mother and your wife,
thistledown-free and unafraid of winter.
You, self-confessed gusty man and a half,
languished in whisky and bitter-sweet ale,
like the Dewi singing, ready with a laugh
and a rhyme like a spouting whale.
What of your notorious love of Caitlin?
In the owl-light of the halfway-house,
stormy, rebellious, she was always waiting,
your jealously protective spouse.
And what of Rosie Probert and Captain Cat,
shipwrecked on the bible-black dreams
of starless Llareggub, with its crowblack
fishingboat-bobbing, dab-filled sea?
The end came thousands of miles from home,
stewed in alcohol and steamed by fog,
your life summed up in stories and poems:
a portrait of the artist as an older dog.
Kim M. Russell, 18th May 2021
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My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: Poems to a Poet
Laura is back to host poetics and she begins with a well-known quote from T.S. Eliot, reminding us that poets come from a long lineage.
Laura refers to a chapter in Ted Hughes’ essay ‘Poetry in the Making’, which says, “when we want to convey an …impression, we let one or two details suggest the whole”. Laura also shares poems by well-known poets about other writers: Gwendolyn Brooks’ ‘Of Robert Frost’; Elizabeth Jennings’ ‘Meditation on D. H. Lawrence” and ‘For Edward Thomas’.
For today’s Poetics prompt, Laura would like us to select one of our favourite poets (a celebrated or a lesser known one) and write a poem either about them in the indirect voice, or addressing them in the direct voice, as in Jennings’ poem ‘For Edward Thomas’. The title must include the poet’s name, we must try to employ the poet’s recognisable style (in the form of an ode if we choose the direct voice), but there are no other rules for meter or poetry form.
14th May was not only my husband’s birthday, it was also the seventh annual celebration of International Dylan Thomas Day.
I love how you took me through his life starting with his most famous poem, Not going gently, indeed a genius pickled in booze. Love how you brought back poems I have never heard of.
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Thank you, Bjorn!
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My goodness this is stunning! 💝💝 You have given us such a detailed glimpse into the life of Dylan Thomas that as a reader, it’s easy for me to believe that you might have known him in person! Especially like; “What of your notorious love of Caitlin? In the owl-light of the halfway-house, stormy, rebellious, she was always waiting.” I feel a novel coming up 😀
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Thank you so much, Sanaa! I studied him and taught him in a past life. 🙂
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Kim you have combined his bio with UMW and picked out some gorgeous Dylanesque words – self-confessed gusty man and a half especyially rang in my ears
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Thank you so much, Laura!
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Excellent response, Kim – like Sanaa says, you write as if you knew him well! I like the nod to ‘Do not go gentle…’ and my favourite line of all is:
‘thistledown-free and unafraid of winter.’ – what a perfect way to be!
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Thanks so much, Ingrid. It could only really be Dylan Thomas, Shakespeare, Seamus Heaney or Carol Ann Duffy, all of whom I’ve written about or used in prompts – and now I’ve added another poem I wrote ages ago about Carol Ann Duffy. I didn’t realise how many poems I’d written with her in mind!
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Kim I have just watched a movie about Dylan Thomas and the two women in his life. It was wonderful. It was either on Netflix or Amazon. I hope you get to see it. You nailed his life with your wonderful ode ☺️
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Thank you, Christine. I’ve seen that movie. They chose excellent actors to play Dylan and Caitlin.
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You encapsulated the poet’s story so well, including the sad downward spiral ending in his death at a young age. So sad.
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Thank you, Bev.
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Wow, you’ve captured history and style. Last line is powerful.
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Thank you so much!
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You capture the character of the author, as well as his writing.
And belated happiness to your husband.
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Thanks Ken!
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Love Dylan Kim, one of my top five favorite poets. This is superbly envisioned and constructed, do well written — excellent.
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Thank you kindly, Rob!
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You did right by Thomas here, his complexities are well penned and I did not realize that about May 14th, how cool!
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Thank you, Tricia. I think we should have a Dylan Thomas prompt next year.
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Your love for this poet comes through loud and clear. Wonderful poem and wonderful image to go with it.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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I love this. Fabulous imagery. Just so Thomas too.
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Thanks so much. Dylan Thomas was one of my first poetic loves.
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A great poem Kim. Thomas had a very short life due to the choices he made. His poetry has intrigued many as it is passed on and around since his death. I like the way you write from a perspective of questioning the way his life played out.
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Thank you so much, Dwight. I’ve loved his work since I was at school. His life was turbulent, to say the least.
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You are welcome!
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Kim, I’ve gotta know… is this information that you just happened to know off the top of your head? Your poem is like a history lesson! WoW!
-David
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I’m a bit of a fan, David” I taught at a high school and one year I had a very high achieving group from year 9 through to GCSEs and decided to get them to tackle Under Milk Wood, which I backed up with his poetry and short stories. It was a very successful year group, They loved it so much they recorded their own version of the radio play. I think I have a copy somewhere.
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cool!
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I never tire of Thomas’ poetry … thank you for choosing him. A great write, Kim.
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Thank you, Helen.
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Why do so many of the great ones give in to the booze? Such a waste. Lovely tribute, Kim, and to his good night.
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Thank you, Jane.
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As others have commented, you knew him so well – it must have been a wonderful experience to see your students inspired by him.
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It was.
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as the kids might say, Oh, SNAP ~
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I’m just going over to read and comment after the deepest night’s sleep I’ve had in ages. I’ll be checking out yours. Btw I still say snap!
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The not-so-gentle opening made me smile as it is his most known imprint, perhaps. Thank you for all the names you mentioned and the stories you shared, a well-written profile by a poet to another.
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Thank you!
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you’re welcome!
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What a writer, what a life, what a poem, cuts like a knife. You see his strength, you see his weakness, you give him credit, understand the bleakness.
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Thank you.
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Excellent tribute!
“like a spouting whale.” these words made me smile.
Your poem is amazingly biographical for him….this would be a fine obituary actually. So very well done.
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Thank you, Lill.
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