Death wears Anorexia well,
draping the latest fashion
against her bony frame –
it’s all about the name –
weighing herself up
in the mirror, nude.
Her attitude is rude
and sassy,
with a hint of fear,
as she tucks lank hair
behind her ear,
turns to view
her new tattoo
and wonders why
it’s shrunk.
Kim M. Russell, 15th September 2016
My response to imaginary garden with real toads Bits Of Inspiration ~ If Death Were A Woman
Today Susie has introduced us to Ellen Kort, Wisconsin’s first Poet Laureate, serving from 2001-2004, and author of eleven books and eight collections of poetry. Ms. Kort’s poetry has been performed by the New York City Dance Theatre and recorded on audio by Ellen Burstyn, Ed Asner and Alfre Woodard. Susie has also introduced us to the poem ‘If Death Were A Woman’. She says she was intrigued by the concept and delighted by Kort’s approach to something we often coin as bleak. Below is an excerpt from the poem.
I’d want her to come for me
smelling of cinnamon wearing
bright cotton purple maybe hot
pink a red bandana in her hair
he’d bring good coffee papaya juice
bouquet of sea grass saltine crackers
and a lottery ticket We’d dip
our fingers into moist pouches
of lady’s slippers crouch down to see
how cabbages feel when wind bumps
against them in the garden
Susie has asked us who the woman named Death would look like. Could it be Helen Mirren, who portrays Death in the upcoming movie, Collateral Beauty? Is Death beautiful strength? Or sassy? Whichever lady death is, Susie wants us to write about her, approaching the topic in whatever manner we choose. It could be physical death, death to eating our favourite food. It could be the death of a summer garden, a cherished pet, a favourite television show.
This is a wonderful poem.
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Thank you, Brian!
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very interesting view Kim
“It’s all about the name –
Weighing herself up
In the mirror, nude.”
much love…
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Much love back, Gillena 😊
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This is ones of those poems that seem to cut right through me – with the horror and truth of it. I’m fascinated by how you took the actions of a woman suffering anorexia and made those actions the actions of death itself. You stripped her bare and exposed her — haunting. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Stacie!
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For me the image you present of a female Death figure is incredibly apt. Not an easy comparison to make by any means but very effective.
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Thank you, Kerry.
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so very powerful!
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Thank you, Candy!
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I LOVE this!!!
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Thank you! I was worried I might offend somebody.
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As soon as I read the first three lines I hit “follow”
this is damn good, I look forward to reading more
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Thank you for reading and following, Amy Jo! It’s a bit of a mixed bag of scribbles but I hope you find more poems you ‘ll like.
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This is masterful.. the shrunken tattoo on the skeletal frame… yes that’s an image I love.
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Thanks Bjorn. See you over at the dVerse Poets Pub tomorrow!
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Apt, that the body art would appear smaller, as expression lasers down to one obsession.
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ps–this is Fireblossom in Wprd Press clothes.
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“Death wears Anorexia well” That is so powerful. All thought falls to one tattoo. It speaks of each element of life disappearing into the fog of final. Thanks so much for writing for the prompt.
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Thanks for reading Susie!
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