My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie B&P’s Shadorma & Beyond Song That Luc Bat
A brisk breeze blew clouds aside
Revealed an expanse of wide
Delicate China blue
Waking trees from hibernation
Celebrating creation
In a brief spring flirtation
Coy daffodils struggled
Against the ardour of the wind
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
writing in north norfolk 
Wow, you really ran with this form, Kim — very nice! I enjoyed this 🙂
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Thank you, Paloma. Keep chucking those unusual forms at me – I love a challenge!
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This simply flows so beautifully!
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This is really well written .. I admire how you’ve gotten this to flow so beautifully!
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Thank you so much for your kind comment, Georgia.
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