The words that flow or inch their way
from germ of thought to lips,
to point of nib, or fingertips on keys,
can only be caught if you set them free.
They are yours to do with what you will.
But when another speaks your words,
awake or in the depths of sleep,
or writes them down to keep,
they echo, shiver stars, melt mountains
and flood the universe with you.
Kim M. Russell, 8th April 2018

My response to The Poetry School NaPoWriMo Prompt for Day 8: Dedication, shared on Poets United Poetry Pantry.
For today’s prompt, Ali would like us to write a poem for someone. It should be dedicated to them, and (if we like) speak to them as well. Our example is ‘A Poem for Emily’ by Miller Williams.
How lucky we are as creatures able to express ourselves in so many ways. None better that our way with words when stories can be told and poems of composed letting us hear and see what others think with our own ears and eyes.
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This is so beautiful!💜 I love the idea of words that “echo, shiver stars, melt mountains and flood the universe.”💜
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Thank you, Sanaa! 💞
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I love the shivering stars and melting mountains!
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🌌
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It is always gratifying to me to see when some of my mad thoughts resonate in other people.
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😊
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Interesting really to think how one’s own words sound when coming out of someone else’s mouth! Surprising sometimes, I think.
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When I think of all the poetry read aloud in classes across the world, I wonder how the poets might feel and how I would feel if one of my poems were ever read aloud by someone other than me. I think I might possibly implode! 😊
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This is so beautiful. I love the idea of flooding the Universe with ourselves through our poetry.
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Shelly.
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Oh I really liked where this ended….I never thought of what it means for another to utter my poem! Beautiful.
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Thank you, Donna. It’s only a draft and needs some development. The first lines are the strongest and the rest of the poem needs to follow their lead as far as structure and rhythm are concerned. Something to put away and return to another time. 😊
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Such a strong and powerful voice
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Thank you, Jae.
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So beautiful….you highlight the life that resides within poems….they have an eternal effect on all within earshot.
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Cheers Viv!
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😊
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This is so true, Kim ! “They are yours to do with what you will” and when others speak of our words the universe is filled with us – such a beautiful thought, loved it 🙂
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Thank you so much, Neeraj!
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Such a nice thought here. Love how you describe the joy of a poet.
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Such a wonderful write Kim, indeed words for me to keep.
I too find it amazing that thoughts run down our fingers and become words on a page.
I guess the same would apply to tying a shoelace, the thought then the action – but no, I think it more than that, there is a certain magic there…
Anna :o]
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Thank you, Anna 🙂
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You are on a creative roll my friend….
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🙂
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Indeed a shared poem is mighty
Much🌼love
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Thank you, Gillena. Much love to you too 🌷
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you caught the essence and power of words perfectly…
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Thank you, Robert!
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kaykuala
they echo, shiver stars, melt mountains
and flood the universe with you.
To think that creative writing has the strength and the power to do it!
Hank
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That’s why we’re part of the poets’ community!
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Wonderful words that evoke a love letter or love song aspect. Truly a poem for a poet!
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Thank you, Wendy!
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Words can only be caught if you set them free… Wonderful, Kim!
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Thank you, Sarah!
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Wonderful! Your poem makes m want to read other poets work aloud even more than usual. Thanks.
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me, poet’s (always proof before publishing!)
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🙂
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Susan.
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Ooh, a poem dedicated to me! And to her, and him, and him, and her, and them, and us…. Gorgeous, thank you.
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You are more than welcome, Rosemary, and him and her, and them….
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Poetry can be that powerful
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What a power to create and change with words! Well told.
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Thank you, Colleen.
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Brava.. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna! 😊🌷
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Wow!!
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Thank you, Annell!
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NICE!!!
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Thank you very much!
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lovely poem…
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Beautiful!
Hi! I invite you all to get some dose of therapeutic poems and get inspired! Just click the link below:
https://poetrygallery650854510.wordpress.com/
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https://addictedfitnessblog.wordpress.com/2018/04/29/devils-addiction/
Not a poet ….just tried something.
Hope you like it 😃
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Could you give me some feedback on my work? I’m just starting out and could use some pointers!
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Why don’t you join in some of the prompts at dVerse Poets Pub or Imaginary Garden with Real Toads,, or even have a go at Japanese poetry forms (haiku, tanka, haibun) at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai? We often try out new forms, one of which is the Quadrille, a poem in 44 words, created by the dVerse team. Last year we published our second anthology. You would be made very welcome. It does get addictive, though… 🙂
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Really good
Could you just check out mine for some points where I could improve.PLS!
https://jeferhymester.wordpress.com/
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Reblogged this on SEO.
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Hello, I am a newbie to the blogging….Can you please check mine and also support with guidance!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, Dee!
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You’re welcome.. Happy Friday..
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Lovely writing! Hi, I’ve only just begun blogging. I’ve shared the first 2 poems which I’ve written. Do check and follow out my new blog and please give me your suggestions! 🙂
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I will be over to check out your blog at the weekend. Thank you for the invitation.
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I tried to view but got a message t that the site is no longer available and has been deleted.
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Oh! I figure it out soon. I’ve invited you to follow my blog so you can view it 🙂
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“and flood the universe with you” is a beautiful phrase. I like how reading this poem seems very melodic. Great job!
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Thank you so much, Alyssa!
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Love the words and the way it flows!
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Thank you!
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